Framarz Bagheri

Rookie - 117 Points (1962 / Lahijan-Iran)

A Cup Of You - Poem by Framarz Bagheri

Pale light of autumn morning

Rubbing her muzzle on my shoulder

Paints your smile on my window pane

Autumn light

Your skin

My zest to see you

All i see in my cup of tea!


Comments about A Cup Of You by Framarz Bagheri

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/1/2011 3:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...
    Magnificient write... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (10/1/2011 3:16:00 AM)

    I'm soaked in this beautiful short art, nice words...deeper and longer than total of words you have used..Like this write very much_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afsaneh Mesgarzadeh (10/1/2011 2:58:00 AM)

    welldone
    like that, that would be better if you rewrite the translation and use another word for fram and also zest... i liked it and it was only a suggestion my frined. good luck (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,929 Points Ken E Hall (2/10/2010 3:43:00 AM)

    This is a very clever little poem the ways you can picture the words in your head can be read different ways well well done
    regards (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2009



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