Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 270 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

A Flower In Disguise… - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Filling the air around sublime a fragrance strikes!
Alluring sweet 'n soft, this soothing smell arrives
My sense rears to find from where this feel derives
But fails to place the source; who sends this scent divine?

Oh! Dear! I now hear arousing words yours
Passion, honey to share and profound burning fire
Before the sleepless night disheartened goes tired
It is your flower that invites me to there!

17 08 08

Comments about A Flower In Disguise… by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Gold Star - 41,637 Points Chinedu Dike (2/15/2015 11:13:00 AM)

    A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, subtly penned, and nicely encapsulated into a lovely poem. Very sweet indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,848 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (12/30/2014 3:25:00 AM)

    Oh! this is so beautifully composed.....It's sensuality in suspended time, lingering in the beautiful
    with wonderful and loving words.......amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (5/28/2010 10:04:00 AM)

    Good arrangement! Good flow of words. Enjoyable read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points KYLEE BARTZ (5/20/2010 3:07:00 AM)

    good poem. you have your own style. and it sounds good. the words are just flowy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 487 Points Patti Masterman (12/2/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    This is clever and also very sweet. Any flower would be proud to have this written in its honor, I might add. (smile) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mandara Pookal (11/14/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    Who could this truly be?
    Sublime and fancy free?
    Alluring sweet and soft
    Your sense to soar aloft?
    So may the fire burn
    As sleepless should you turn
    Aroused in passion's fire
    Disguised but causing ire
    (I pray that this be a fitting tribute to your outstanding love potion) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (11/12/2009 7:48:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poetic....write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (10/20/2009 4:54:00 AM)

    very beautiful poem! ..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Vaibhav Pandey (8/15/2009 5:54:00 AM)

    what a beautiful poem kesav sir.....romantic and sweet....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (7/30/2009 4:19:00 AM)

    A very charming way to please... though it could be all true, enjoyed it tremendously! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonya Florentino (7/7/2009 6:31:00 AM)

    Ha-ha, Esav...well done... you've managed to disguise eroticsm which make it all the more so.... ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 12:38:00 PM)

    'It’s your flower
    Inviting me to there! '

    Stunning poem with excellent ending. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (6/18/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    You touched heights unreached when a wafting fragrance personifies your love, written with brilliance!
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angelic(Annie) Female (6/3/2009 11:54:00 AM)

    Oh so beautiful, with a smooth melodious flow-...........seems like attractions in the air: -) ......... rated you 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (5/21/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    Great poem like your other poems. Fluent, mellifluous, meaningful and harmonious.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (5/20/2009 12:14:00 PM)

    Flower in disguise, Fragrance awakens, searching - encompassing love, life and divinity, a very good write and I will read again- a lot going on here. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fathmath Sana (5/17/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    intresting kesav. very nice. i loved the poem........10/10
    ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (5/1/2009 9:57:00 PM)

    Elusive is the is the allusion attached to it. Sometimes the aura surrounding the mystery is far more alluring than flesh and blood described by you (or not) . Such is the power of illusion! !
    Keep on loving, Kesav..

    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Al Ramos (4/2/2009 3:38:00 PM)

    This one hit the spot, well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (3/20/2009 5:08:00 AM)

    A subtle poem - beautifully expressed Kesav (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 16, 2014

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