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Lovey Bby
(10/29/2009 2:27:00 PM) |
wow. very deep i admire yur sense of thought. unlike my unorganized thinking.
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G. Murdock
(9/29/2009 5:38:00 AM) |
I enjoy the use of almost strange phrasing in this poem. I think this poem is about dreaming and imagining only to feel the gravity of life and reality pulling you back into the 'realness'of life. The bird is always the symbol of escape or of spirit in the Jungian analysis. The egg is the sense of inadequacy or lack of confidence which contains the fledgling who must leave the protection of nacent life and make its way on the winds which are unpredictable but soaring is joy and adventure and the egg must be left behind in order to experience the program of life which is always nearing its end and closer to the ultimate. In other words we must (you must) live in order to discover the limitless sky.
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Juliana Crescenzo
(9/28/2009 8:07:00 AM) |
very good. i thought it was very well thought out. keep up the good work!
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Laila Layla
(9/28/2009 5:57:00 AM) |
Great poem, the words you've chosen, the way you've mixed them, so beautiful. I wish i could write better poem next time. Inspiring poem that you wrote
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Niken Kusuma Wardani
(9/26/2009 12:25:00 AM) |
I think it's not just a glance of patience, as you had dive through & dwell all very well... good review of 'patience', tks for share
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Felix Lee
(9/24/2009 9:42:00 AM) |
Nice poem. I like the way you express your view. I just hope that one day, I'll be able to write poems like yours.
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OneLine Poet
(9/23/2009 7:19:00 PM) |
Nice poem very imaginative and thought out.
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Tori Trentacoste
(9/23/2009 4:48:00 PM) |
this was a really touching poem very calming and i really enjoyed reading it
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Chantelle G
(9/23/2009 10:38:00 AM) |
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem and the way it expresses patience. It is great.
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