Udiah (witness to Yah)

Rookie - 36 Points (1959 / USA)

A Hawk - Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

The harvest soon comes
A hawk's eye is needed now
Two watching a front


Comments about A Hawk by Udiah (witness to Yah)

  • Gold Star - 5,704 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/15/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    Using the eye of a hawk ensure that nothing is missed and very poem need such a tool. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,594 Points Bri Edwards (2/11/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    i could see why someone would rate this a three (3) . but i'm not trying to find fault. reading the other comment, which mentions haiku helps explain. i don't have much experience with haiku, but i don't know that i've ever read one that i did like. but thanks for sharing.....i guess.
    does it have to do with a pair of hawks hunting? ? i love birds. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (9/20/2012 3:24:00 AM)

    Haiku uhm? Nicely written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 1, 2012


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