Tirupathi Chandrupatla

A Lonely Fallen Leaf - Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

One fine morning
In the season of fall
The leaf pick up made its early round
And the trash was just picked
Sun was shining
The sky was blue
And the wind blew in occasional spurts…
The empty trash bin lay on its side
Rocking and rocking with every blow of the wind.

A lonely dry leaf flew by and landed on the ground
Inching forward and backward as the wind blew,
And the empty trash bin kept on rocking.

The world seemed to be in a dynamic equilibrium
With motion of all its elements synchronized.

I watched with curiosity
If the lonely leaf would be trapped in the bin
And make its way to the landfill mound!

With a final gust of wind
The leaf flew past the bin and away
The wind stopped and the bin lay still
And the leaf, I hope, will find a safe place and degrade
And contribute its share to the ecological parade.

Comments about A Lonely Fallen Leaf by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

  • Gold Star - 27,526 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/28/2014 12:52:00 AM)

    Though the simple narrative in the poem seems to be not much importance it has a definite of life and it is a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (9/1/2013 12:23:00 AM)

    A usual episode from nature`s routine happenings has been well rendered here inviting the mind to ponder over the mandatory impact of cause and effect in human life. The interwoven aspects of observation and recapitulation have effectively been driven home in this poem. Kudos to you Tirupathi Chandrupatla. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,178 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/28/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem...I could picturise each line..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,735 Points Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    loved the story of lonely fallen leaf. beautiful write n imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,735 Points Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    loved the story of lonely fallen leaf. beautiful write n imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,745 Points Ken E Hall (7/16/2013 2:24:00 AM)

    Such is natures way and so well observed into a natural windy day and what we have all seen a single dancing leaf and how you present it...great...rejgards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmad Holderness (6/12/2013 5:16:00 PM)

    quite lovely with good imagery (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (6/11/2013 7:05:00 PM)

    nicely written poem. and the fallen leaf could also be a metaphor. Nice imagery (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,973 Points Patricia Grantham (6/1/2013 3:14:00 PM)

    Even a lonely fallen leaf has it's place in the ecology of
    nature. We too can be just like that lonely leaf. We also
    play an important part in the Human race however small
    it may seem we can make an impact. A wonderful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Devanshi Shah (5/19/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    This expresses a lot! It is beautiful... truely amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,658 Points Savita Tyagi (4/20/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    Enjoyed your poem. Through little leaf you speak a volume. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014

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