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A Lost Soul

When the world changed around her she hid in the labyrinths of her mind.
She fled down tunnels, old pathways of misspent youth.
She fell deeper into places she'd once been and it hurt.
She revisited old enemies and lost friends she'd forgotten.
When she came to the end of the tunnels she hit the wall.
Reason came to greet her just a tad too late.
The night whisperer licked her cheek,
gobbling her up into damnation.

Submitted: Saturday, June 23, 2012
Edited: Saturday, June 23, 2012


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  • Danny Draper (9/17/2012 7:15:00 AM)

    The dark side, the black tide, the other side, may just be the fun-est ride.

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  • Dougie Fresh (6/27/2012 3:06:00 PM)

    Agree with darkangel, very nicely done! sometimes the shortest poems are the best!

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  • Darkangel Flyfree (6/27/2012 12:36:00 PM)

    Dark and twisted, I like it! ! Nicely done! ! !

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  • Erie Diane (6/23/2012 3:08:00 PM)

    i like it it's okay

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