Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 8,743 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

A Lovely Dream! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

I dreamt of a small home
Built by warmth of love.
Tiny windows
To welcome cute birds and
Few tiny squirrels,
Where only the freshness of fragrance
Often breathe in.

A tiny desire of humbled life.
Every day only a single rose bloom in my tiny garden of love.
Where my beloved will tuck a rose in my hair.

Delicious meal with just one sweet pudding.
Where saving will be few, quiet enough to fulfill ones dreams too.

May be its just a lovely dream
Many may be blessed with such lovely dreams
But they may be dreaming of someone else's dream
As I am dreaming someone else's!

That's why wishes never remain fulfilled
They remained mere a dream in our lives!

A lovely dream that remained mere a dream!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014


Comments about A Lovely Dream! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 9,882 Points Heather Wilkins (8/15/2014 7:17:00 PM)

    to dream is human. each of us do it. lovely write nice imagery (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,402 Points Amitava Sur (8/12/2014 9:46:00 AM)

    With dreams only the life can move ahead, the dreams are the essential primers of life. The more you dream the more you 'll be encouraged. Hence all those dreams are very welcome Geeths, very nicely detailed. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 549 Points Silvi Tripathy (8/11/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    Once Dr.APJ abdul kalam told that, Give wings to your dreams and fly high. I remembered the line, But I don't know about real life. I liked to read the poem much, But feel some what change in my thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,489 Points Valsa George (8/10/2014 10:56:00 PM)

    Whether realized or not, to have such lovely dreams will definitely brighten up our lives! I enjoyed reading the spontaneous unfolding of your tiny dream where there is a single rose in your garden of love and where birds and squirrels are admitted through the tiny windows! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,109 Points Hazel Durham (8/10/2014 1:47:00 PM)

    Dreams enrich our souls to aspire to what we really want out of this life, but even though they don't come true it's good to have had them!
    A dream of a humble home so beautifully written with panache! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/9/2014 11:11:00 PM)

    lovely write Geetha, flows effortlessly. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,678 Points Neela Nath (8/9/2014 9:43:00 PM)

    We nourish a dream of great things.But, when it does not come true, we become upset.This is a lesson for us.To dream of a happy home is a sweet desire indeed.Because, the house may be big but to make it a home is not easy.Geetha, a superb poem you shared with us.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,953 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/9/2014 10:34:00 AM)

    A small home full of warmth and love is a dream for everyone. Its fulfillment is a dream come true. Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,648 Points Salini Nair (8/9/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    they may be dreaming of someone else's dream
    As I am dreaming someone else's! ..........may be true.....................but this is a dream for everyone........nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,320 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/8/2014 1:20:00 PM)

    Indeed a lovely dream it is and composed so elegantly.......Geetha......I am so much impressed........thanks for
    sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,335 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/8/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    A home wherein there is love has always been a woman's favorite dream, first he dreams it for himself then for her daughters and grand daughters. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 8, 2014



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