Geetha Jayakumar

(Kerala Palakkad)

A Lovely Dream!

I dreamt of a small home
Built by warmth of love.
Tiny windows
To welcome cute birds and
Few tiny squirrels,
Where only the freshness of fragrance
Often breathe in.

A tiny desire of humbled life.
Every day only a single rose bloom in my tiny garden of love.
Where my beloved will tuck a rose in my hair.

Delicious meal with just one sweet pudding.
Where saving will be few, quiet enough to fulfill ones dreams too.

May be its just a lovely dream
Many may be blessed with such lovely dreams
But they may be dreaming of someone else's dream
As I am dreaming someone else's!

That's why wishes never remain fulfilled
They remained mere a dream in our lives!

A lovely dream that remained mere a dream!

© 2014

Submitted: Friday, August 08, 2014

Topic(s): dream

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,473 Points Amitava Sur (8/12/2014 9:46:00 AM)

    With dreams only the life can move ahead, the dreams are the essential primers of life. The more you dream the more you 'll be encouraged. Hence all those dreams are very welcome Geeths, very nicely detailed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 272 Points Tadasha Tripathy (8/11/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    Once Dr.APJ abdul kalam told that, Give wings to your dreams and fly high. I remembered the line, But I don't know about real life. I liked to read the poem much, But feel some what change in my thought. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,967 Points Valsa George (8/10/2014 10:56:00 PM)

    Whether realized or not, to have such lovely dreams will definitely brighten up our lives! I enjoyed reading the spontaneous unfolding of your tiny dream where there is a single rose in your garden of love and where birds and squirrels are admitted through the tiny windows! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,079 Points Hazel Durham (8/10/2014 1:47:00 PM)

    Dreams enrich our souls to aspire to what we really want out of this life, but even though they don't come true it's good to have had them!
    A dream of a humble home so beautifully written with panache! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,879 Points Neela Nath (8/9/2014 9:43:00 PM)

    We nourish a dream of great things.But, when it does not come true, we become upset.This is a lesson for us.To dream of a happy home is a sweet desire indeed.Because, the house may be big but to make it a home is not easy.Geetha, a superb poem you shared with us.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,959 Points Salini Nair (8/9/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    they may be dreaming of someone else's dream
    As I am dreaming someone else's! ..........may be true.....................but this is a dream for everyone........nice (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,565 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/8/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    A home wherein there is love has always been a woman's favorite dream, first he dreams it for himself then for her daughters and grand daughters. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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