yoonoos peerbocus (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

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A Moon's Fate

Mother rhythm borne, sunlit
Torch, diurnal round bound,
Recurrent becomes her resurrection

As elusive her Time, obedient
To which orbit all Nature's
Marvels bar her way to for Ever

Unlike mood moulded man's
Soaring soul, heaven attained,
Reveals higher.

yoonoos peerbocus
Submitted: Sunday, July 31, 2011
Edited: Sunday, July 31, 2011

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  • Rashmi Pradeep Kumar (5/18/2012 11:13:00 PM)

    short n' sweet poem... gud work...

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  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (5/5/2012 6:21:00 AM)

    ''Feeling great to have read your works....
    the depth of your thoughts..''

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  • Aisha Al-amin (2/6/2012 1:22:00 PM)

    This Poem(like all of your other poems) is so good and meaningful! ! !

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  • K.D. Brown (10/1/2011 1:59:00 PM)

    It describes the relationship between the Earth and Moon at first glance.
    But it could also be used to describe Man to God. In that, we too must obey.
    We're all connected and each time enlightenment is within our grasp, just a trickle of it slips through and touches our mind and brings us ever closer to Nirvana.

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  • Auwal Abdullahi (9/29/2011 8:59:00 AM)

    Maturity speaks in this poem. I wish I could write this way. Keep writing Sir.

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  • Maia Padua (9/29/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    Feeling great to have read your works....
    the depth of your thoughts..
    the depth of your styles captivates us
    esp to me that is still learning
    thanks for sharing

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  • Unwritten Soul (9/22/2011 11:48:00 AM)

    [Marvels bar her way to for Ever]-- A fantastic injection of whole write :) Unwritten SOul

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  • soulful heart (9/21/2011 4:02:00 AM)

    wow............no words to praise.......wanna learn from u to say sooooooo much in so little......plz chk out my 'Lost in Thoughts'..waitng for ur comments

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  • Miroslava Odalovic (9/3/2011 5:23:00 PM)

    This is too beautiful to be a definition :) Amazing craft.

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  • Bethany Williams (9/2/2011 2:34:00 PM)

    This is great nice rhythm. I havent read your poems in a while but I'm trying to get back into poetry. lol

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