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(31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

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A Pain

Noiseless break of nerves
You find many life curves
Little you speak but
Never you speak it.

Try is what you try
To feel free as tree
Tree of forest and street
Free at one lonely at another.

Expressing it is never done
Till the date I swear never
Everything happens patiently
Indeed happens noiseless.

Blood and breath, life and death
Hi and hello, bye and good bye
Gets one and becomes two
Me and myself

Submitted: Sunday, September 18, 2011


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  • Apurva Jain (7/21/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    lovely........! ! ! ! ! ! ! : D

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  • Ramesh Rai (6/15/2012 4:10:00 AM)

    Tree of forest and street
    Free at one lonely at another.

  • Joshua Crumpton (4/22/2012 9:28:00 AM)

    Great poem, nice choice of words

  • Sossi Khachadourian (3/26/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    Blood and breath, life and death
    yes that's the real life my friend! ! 1
    Good poem i like it!

  • Jayson Salois (3/14/2012 7:41:00 AM)

    Good poem I like it... you should read and comment on my few poems about suffering, pain, and depression.

  • Karen Deeks (3/9/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    A real decent piece and my favourite line is (Everything happens patiently) thank you for sharing... Karen :)

  • Raghvendra K (12/23/2011 10:22:00 AM)

    good nicely written.....

  • Divya Divya B (11/16/2011 6:06:00 AM)

    pain which is noise less and everybody will face without any noise

  • Luvo Mjayezi (11/15/2011 4:39:00 AM)

    I love the poem, but I hate rhming in genral. you have a very on point yet fragmnted way of saying thisngs. it makes your poems a very interesting and a bit challenging to read, whic is really good in my books.

  • grame peele (11/3/2011 4:36:00 AM)

    yes it is true pain is always noiseless. love it

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