(Tripura. India)

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A poet's yet to born

three two one
I'm done,
thought a lot of whole.
lived a life of prose and fight,
let poetry be my Goal.
friends are here,
hope they cheer
as I make a piece,
hope they write
on every byte
hope they laugh and tease.
I love them all,
who read my book
who raise me little high,
who praise my work
or breaks my heart
by telling little lie.
Hope I share,
Oh, my dear,
All that I can't
alone bear.
All that I kept locked in my heart,
All that I can write in spurt.
I bow to all,
who raise me or fall
or gives me little thorn,
I bow to all,
I bow to all,
A poet's yet to born.
.
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posted on 04-06-2008
Copyright ©®2008, Palas Kumar Ray. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 04, 2008
Edited: Thursday, March 25, 2010


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  • Walterrean Salley (8/12/2012 11:57:00 PM)

    friends are here,
    hope they cheer
    as I make a piece,
    hope they write
    on every byte
    hope they laugh and tease.

    Palas, you are poet that's well on his way. Cheers to you.

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  • Anand Madhukar (9/17/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    Very nice Palas, exquitely penned and wonderfully woven.

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  • rago rago (7/23/2009 11:10:00 PM)

    you have born............and you are the poet........ let you sprout fragrance........

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  • surya . (6/23/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    sure you have said it right. one, s friend and their support and criticism makes or mar a poet most. hence one should acknowledge their suppoert. lovely concept.
    voted10
    surya

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  • Penny Hemans (3/16/2009 3:42:00 PM)

    I agree with Tj... and it is through poetry that we learn so much more.

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  • Tj Becker (10/17/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    I loved this read. The flow was really excellent, never once lost or skipped it's easy gait.
    It was original, didnt' follow another's ideas, just a good read

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (10/17/2008 1:54:00 AM)

    This is great poetry. Exquisite language & Excprsssion.........great thoughts...10++++++

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  • Caterpillar MC (10/8/2008 12:41:00 PM)

    Nice and peppy, simple yet profound....

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  • Reetesh Sabr (9/29/2008 9:16:00 AM)

    dada...first impression only is so lovely, so i can guess the treasure ahead!
    khoob bhalo!

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/15/2008 4:47:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, agree with you and added 10.

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