(August 21 1990 / Belgium)

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A prayer for a Lost Loved One

Silence is no silence,
fear engulfs loved ones,
voices in heads pray,
for safety of a lost one.

No news is no sign of good news;
tears roll down; down to the ground,
shakes and anger circling ascends
in and out like breathing.

Silence is no silence,
fear engulfs loved ones,
voices in heads pray,
for safety of a lost one.

Fury rises with the sun,
and stays behind with the moon.
Silent stares, lone figures
Walk up down, awaiting news. And…

No news is no sign of good news;
tears roll down; down to the ground,
shakes and anger circling ascends
in and out like breathing.

Simper a cuddle no longer possible-
weight lose, gray hallow face
sleepless, reckless nights of
curving streaking worry.

Silence is no silence,
fear engulfs loved ones,
voices in heads pray,
for safety of a lost one.

No sign, sun shines; wondering thoughts,
to the safety of a child
tears of fear, sadness, rain falls
on ovals – fear rises and…

No news is no sign of good news;
tears roll down; down to the ground,
shakes and anger circling ascends
in and out like breathing.

Communities worry, grief, feel
And hold lost ones together-
Give and build strength,
Prayers whisper from door to door.

Silence is no silence,
fear engulfs loved ones,
voices in heads pray,
for safety of a lost one.

Water rolls silently, hands folded,
head bent in silence for prayer.
Whispers of trees blow, blow to the distance
Reveals simper cuddles.
Hands folded,
head bent,
silent prayer, for lost loved one.

Silence is no silence,
fear engulfs loved ones,
voices in heads pray,
for safety of a lost one.

Submitted: Monday, May 14, 2007
Edited: Friday, February 25, 2011


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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/2/2008 1:31:00 AM)

    Appreciate your feelings and expression. But it has become a narrative story. You could have made it much shorter. Drink your passion and devote for poetry.

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  • Cathleen Hodgkinson (6/7/2008 10:51:00 PM)

    You bring the reader right into the experience....the intensity, the fear....of somewhere no one would ever want to be...but a fact of life...beautiful expression.
    -Cathy

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  • ~Silent Butterfly ~ (4/14/2008 5:41:00 AM)

    WOW! really WOW! i LOVE your poets though i only read few of them 'til now!
    GREAT JOB!

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  • Death's forever life (3/25/2008 7:44:00 AM)

    Wow! this is mezmorizing! Thanx for posting!

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/1/2008 2:26:00 AM)

    a very touching works.

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  • Aasiq the poet (2/19/2008 11:20:00 PM)

    a poem deftly using the repetion style to add effect to a sorrowful theme.
    a nice effort.celine..lovely.

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  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/29/2008 3:46:00 PM)

    This poem reflects a sad loss and it does it well, the emotion comes through strong.

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  • Scott Austin (5/15/2007 9:21:00 PM)

    Celine, you have written a wondeful dedication to theose that have lost a love one. The sense of loss is felt in your write. Thank you for sharing your toughts and feelings on this matter.

    Scott

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