Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 10,270 Points (17.03.1965)

A Puzzle - Poem by Lyn Paul

It is now time to say goodbye
Without evening knowing why
The world has not ended, but my watch has stopped
You will now need to pick up the pieces... that I have dropped

See life is like a puzzle, often hard to complete
Life can be a trauma or life can be a treat
But you must remember your strength and how fast life does go
Forget all the woes and watch everything grow

Copyright Reserved May 2014
Lyn Paul

Comments about A Puzzle by Lyn Paul

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (12/6/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    Forget all the woes and watch everything grow , , ,
    wonderful line, , , , once we leave our sorrows aside, , then we can spend that energy in something productive, , , and grow, , (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,410 Points Amitava Sur (10/31/2013 6:26:00 AM)

    A lovely realization about the life as a puzzle with very many trauma & treats.... with a message still you're to move forward.... fine (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,885 Points Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 9:47:00 AM)

    nice poem Lyn. A good observation of life. Life can be a trauma or life can be a treat (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (9/29/2012 9:49:00 AM)

    this is a beautiful message..thank you.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/8/2012 12:58:00 PM)

    Wise observation, it could be applied to all situations (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Deepak Manchanda (8/7/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    the world has not ended but my watch has stopped...I loved that line. I loved the idea of your poem. forget all the woes and watch everything grow.. Will look out for more of your work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 3, 2014

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