Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 72 Points (June 5th / Palghat- Kerala- India)

A Rose Goes Poetic…


Inspired a rose goes poetic!
Sings few lines soft sweet romantic
Humming comes in a bee; plants a kiss!
Verses blush! Go scattered in piece!

Perched on the shade of a poem tree
A blue bird watching in awe and glee
Flies off cooing in her spree
To sign off the lines incomplete!

23rd January 2010

Submitted: Saturday, January 23, 2010
Edited: Thursday, April 29, 2010

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,379 Points Elena Sandu (1/19/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    Hahaha yes dear friend, true, poetry is in everything we only need to open heart and see..I believe in the poetry of this world.. cannot be touched it but I am aware of it..I try listen watch and feel as much as possible.... I always love your poems, am so glad I have found one more fountain of treasure thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Rekha Mandagere (1/6/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    Fantastic imagination. Nice display of passion and vocabulary. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (7/12/2010 9:32:00 PM)

    Like a sweet Melon, sweeten by a honey...wow! a poetry of this Century...
    God bless....a 10 ++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (7/1/2010 7:48:00 AM)

    very sweetly written..very imaginative and poetic
    I love this

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (5/28/2010 9:46:00 AM)

    This was so good. love the expression of the write! Vivid (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepthi Vincent (5/20/2010 12:43:00 PM)

    I was just visualizing it while reading… very beautiful and imaginative! Thanks for sharing this one…: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Whispering Rose (5/20/2010 6:26:00 AM)

    wow beautiful poem, very nicely expressed
    i liked mostly this part
    'Verses blush! Go scattered in pieces'
    thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emma Rose (5/16/2010 5:12:00 AM)

    this is just so cute and romantic...pure..original...loved every single line..10 from me bt where is the rating box. anyways i m going to add it in fav. poems list (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kannan G (5/13/2010 1:25:00 AM)

    A beautiful composition wherein each word is wet with the pristine dew drops of poetry. Best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arwen Lee CW (3/27/2010 10:41:00 PM)

    The poetic rose comes alive because of you Kesav. :)
    Such a lovely piece of writing,10 for sure! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Ratnaprabha Raykar (2/21/2010 10:50:00 AM)

    my fav line ' verses blush go scattered in pieces' i have never read such original phrasing of words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (2/6/2010 5:58:00 PM)

    Yeah very nice well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/3/2010 5:27:00 PM)

    I echo Indira's comment............simple yet superb as ever.......; 0) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 364 Points Indira Renganathan (1/29/2010 1:16:00 AM)

    Highly imaginative..deeply thematic...with simple words....simply superb writing....thanks....thanks for your correction in my poem too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (1/28/2010 5:24:00 AM)

    The beauty of this poem lies in its simplicity and gentle tone... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pradyumna Jyotir (1/27/2010 5:44:00 AM)

    short...sweet and romantic. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 876 Points Sadiqullah Khan (1/27/2010 12:07:00 AM)

    Good rhyming, much humming..you have still made the rose poetic.10 from me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (1/25/2010 11:41:00 AM)

    Too good... It's small and cute... cute like a rose... Very well said... Kesavji.. :) This poem is so lively... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (1/24/2010 2:36:00 AM)

    Kesav, it'a very lovely poem.... 10.......
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (1/24/2010 12:55:00 AM)

    absolute beauty of a poem...pollination takes place within...lovely poem sir (Report) Reply

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