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Blue Eyes (11/18/2008 6:29:00 PM)
oh my godness, i love this poem it is truly expressive. |
Rinzu Susan Rajan (11/13/2008 7:10:00 AM)
an exquisite picture drawn in bful words...
a 10+++ |
James Wakelin (10/12/2008 5:22:00 PM)
Hi Yoonoos Peerbocus. Hows Mauritius?
Your poetry holds itself in a realm of its own.
As I read it I have to think long and hard about what is your driving theme.
I think you have depth and understanding
Keep writing
Peace to you. |
James Timothy Jarrett (10/5/2008 11:58:00 AM)
Wonderfully written. A very deep topic expressed succingtly |
Tj Becker (10/5/2008 9:22:00 AM)
As always a wonderful read. The depths of your works is something beyond compare. |
Rakhi Jayashankar (9/27/2008 4:11:00 AM)
nothing mch to say 20/10 :) |
Deena Natasya (9/21/2008 1:10:00 AM)
I enjoy reading all your poems. They are just so deep. |
Gargi Saha (9/20/2008 12:58:00 PM)
Your poems always have in depth meaning. |
Giuliana Watson (9/20/2008 7:36:00 AM)
Wow. This poem has excellent depth. It is a really invigorating piece to read. As I interpreted the piece, it seemed there is a historical background imbedded in the second layer. The entire second stanza reminds me of Hapgood's reasoning for Atlantis' existence, and then disappearance. The last stanza, as I interpreted, has a metaphorical comparison to Siddartha's idea of attaining Nirvana.
ps Thank you so much for your comment. |
Sarvesh Kulkarni (9/16/2008 1:55:00 AM)
This is a wonderful poem on deliverance. The ultimate realization. A truly poetic piece. Thank you very much. |
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