Treasure Island

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

(June 5th / Palghat- Kerala- India)

A Smile for You...


Breaking to pieces me a play thing
That, you ask me to keep smiling!
Glue applied? Smiling I would remain
If that would make you happy again!

Smile only? I would rather laugh heartly
For no pain now I have;
What I lost to you has been not mine,
My heart only; now you gain also my pain!

01 04 08

Submitted: Tuesday, April 01, 2008
Edited: Friday, May 08, 2009

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  • Vipins Puthooran (8/29/2011 3:48:00 PM)

    You are a great poet,
    What I lost to you has been not mine,
    My heart only; now you gain also my pain.
    Nice line, i liked it very much (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/12/2010 12:58:00 AM)

    Poetic Melancholy Mirth type poem…Loosing is Winning only poets can feel… that diction we find here…but why my ‘achecho’ will strike to loved one? …in poem these common expression…poet’s take refuge in…thanks Sir…
    10 [from heart]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (7/19/2009 3:40:00 AM)

    I am sending my smile and a hug from here, my friend..Hope you like it. LOL
    wonderful piece..You make me smile in this dark and dreary afternoon here in our place.
    SMILE..... (Report) Reply

  • Smiley Hooker (7/9/2009 11:59:00 AM)

    Dear poet, some smiles for you intended not to break your heart! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) (Report) Reply

  • Kurt Behle (5/8/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    Great work! it ia enjoyable. I had a smile for you After reading it! LOL
    10+ For it! (Report) Reply

  • Palitha Ariyarathna (5/6/2009 12:36:00 AM)

    Marvellous writing after missing some one and when the love asking to smile and expect him or she as only a friends its very hard. its happend to the many in the world. except my self. tahnks for your great writings (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (4/30/2009 10:05:00 AM)

    A very nice well written poem Kesav.
    On reading it I can feel the happy release from a confining relationship and so happy you can smile again.
    Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Winnie Angel (4/6/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    ..its a true emotion.the ups and downs of being in love with a person......feeling hurt (Report) Reply

  • Madison Yeater (3/17/2009 7:33:00 PM)

    awww, i liked this. it really brought up my mood.
    yeah, we all have to smile, regardless of the pain we suffer...
    one of my poems has this line 'whats a smile worth? ' this poem struck me, cuz you showed us that worth, the happiness it brings not only us, but to others as well. LOVE this piece. (Report) Reply

  • Naidz Ladia (12/28/2008 3:41:00 AM)

    other says, smile makes us young, laughters too...
    when u dont want to speak, just smile, , , they already know ur answer..
    i like ths piece..how about sarcastic smile? ....my gosh, glue applied.....owwww....better not to smile..hehehhehehheheh
    ths s a good poem by you kesav, ............ coz i realized, i should hve to smile..
    but, i just want to say ths, , , , if u are in pain, even if u are surrounded by all happiness, if u miss someone, , , , , , u cant smile better...
    ths s a good piece... (Report) Reply

  • premji premji (12/1/2008 5:11:00 AM)

    sharing and caring of love and pain...
    smile...smile...smile...
    eventhough voulcanoes are ready to
    erupt deep within...
    10+++ (Report) Reply

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