Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 274 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

A Smile For You... - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Breaking to pieces me a play thing
That, you ask me to keep smiling!
Glue applied? Smiling I would remain
If that would make you happy again!

Smile only? I would rather laugh heartly
For no pain now I have;
What I lost to you has been not mine,
My heart only; now you gain also my pain!

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Comments about A Smile For You... by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (8/29/2011 3:48:00 PM)

    You are a great poet,
    What I lost to you has been not mine,
    My heart only; now you gain also my pain.
    Nice line, i liked it very much (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/25/2010 10:20:00 AM)

    hmmmm..... you're really a poet and this is a real poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/12/2010 12:58:00 AM)

    Poetic Melancholy Mirth type poem…Loosing is Winning only poets can feel… that diction we find here…but why my ‘achecho’ will strike to loved one? …in poem these common expression…poet’s take refuge in…thanks Sir…
    10 [from heart]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (7/27/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    a salty smile with tears hidden within.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Meggie Gultiano (7/19/2009 3:40:00 AM)

    I am sending my smile and a hug from here, my friend..Hope you like it. LOL
    wonderful piece..You make me smile in this dark and dreary afternoon here in our place.
    SMILE..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Smiley Hooker (7/9/2009 11:59:00 AM)

    Dear poet, some smiles for you intended not to break your heart! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/19/2009 5:08:00 AM)

    Clever writing Kesav. You are the winner in the game of love. Lots of smiles now. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (6/18/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    A smile for you, but, Kesav
    There remains only
    Salt stains In the heart!
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/16/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    a sarcasm in pain...well depicted..a lot of relationships have this compulsion...sad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kurt Behle (5/8/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    Great work! it ia enjoyable. I had a smile for you After reading it! LOL
    10+ For it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joel Liew (5/8/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    I totally understand the life of this poem.Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Palitha Ariyarathna (5/6/2009 12:36:00 AM)

    Marvellous writing after missing some one and when the love asking to smile and expect him or she as only a friends its very hard. its happend to the many in the world. except my self. tahnks for your great writings (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,919 Points Marie Shine (4/30/2009 10:05:00 AM)

    A very nice well written poem Kesav.
    On reading it I can feel the happy release from a confining relationship and so happy you can smile again.
    Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Chandrashekar A Posy Poet (4/28/2009 12:10:00 AM)

    so nice and very true! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Surayya Abbas (4/22/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    Smile is a freshness of face. Keep smiling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Winnie Angel (4/6/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    ..its a true emotion.the ups and downs of being in love with a person......feeling hurt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madison Yeater (3/17/2009 7:33:00 PM)

    awww, i liked this. it really brought up my mood.
    yeah, we all have to smile, regardless of the pain we suffer...
    one of my poems has this line 'whats a smile worth? ' this poem struck me, cuz you showed us that worth, the happiness it brings not only us, but to others as well. LOVE this piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/28/2008 3:41:00 AM)

    other says, smile makes us young, laughters too...
    when u dont want to speak, just smile, , , they already know ur answer..
    i like ths about sarcastic smile? gosh, glue applied.....owwww....better not to smile..hehehhehehheheh
    ths s a good poem by you kesav, ............ coz i realized, i should hve to smile..
    but, i just want to say ths, , , , if u are in pain, even if u are surrounded by all happiness, if u miss someone, , , , , , u cant smile better...
    ths s a good piece... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (12/1/2008 5:11:00 AM)

    sharing and caring of love and pain...
    eventhough voulcanoes are ready to
    erupt deep within...
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Morning Star (11/30/2008 1:29:00 AM)

    dunno what to say..
    great piece..
    I'm speechless.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, May 8, 2009

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