adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

A Voice - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

A voice..
resonating through the air
tolerating in reverberations and echoes
vibrating at any different levels
then stored in our memories

A voice shall..
give birth to the tone and rhythm
put pressure on the language
sometimes high, sometimes low
sometimes mediocre

A voice ought to..
be allowed independent
be given a space to spoken
not to deliberately silenced
or forced acceptance

because a voice..
is an endowment
our right as a human
as well as a mandate
which should be used in its place

but a voice..
manipulated from many route
became propaganda's discourse
even used as a weapon
to take advantage of the situation

earthzcity,120613


Comments about A Voice by adheez van der beanthz

  • Silver Star - 3,231 Points Walterrean Salley (9/10/2014 5:28:00 PM)

    Your poem holds a lot of truth. You've chosen a good theme, held to your train of thought and delivers well. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 21,117 Points Valsa George (6/15/2014 2:22:00 AM)

    Our thoughts articulated through voice carry a lot of weight.... It is our right to voice our opinions without fear or favour... Keeping silence on vital issues can be suicidal...! A very powerful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/29/2014 9:42:00 PM)

    A Voice is really a voice and I'm with the voices agreed Glory to be Allah (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Jemima Rivas (3/24/2014 3:03:00 PM)

    yea I agree there is too much voicelessness and subjugation that leads to unfairness in this world people should be aloud their voice
    A voice ought to..
    be allowed independent
    be given a space to spoken
    not to deliberately silenced
    or forced acceptance (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 189 Points Gary H (12/21/2013 10:16:00 PM)

    Fantastic, good stuff thats for true. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,872 Points Susan Lacovara (12/8/2013 4:41:00 PM)

    Where words are often the most powerful of tools, using one's voice, speaking the truth of your soul, is indeed a gift, a right and a great responsibility....choose to voice your heart in the most eloquently honest fashion. A strong piece of writing. I applaud you. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Katerina Richmond (11/12/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    It sorta tells how you see things in a way. good poem. good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (10/23/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Amazing n a wonderful poem, I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Queeny Gona (10/15/2013 9:39:00 AM)

    Amazing! I loved the tone and perspective of the write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/24/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem! ....and very strong....liked it....thanks for inviting ma dear frnd! ;) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,786 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (9/23/2013 2:35:00 AM)

    From various angles voice been analysed logically. Logic takes it shape by the words to clarify an object. Poet has defined well. Such style of writing needs much attention like a research-scholar I think. Last two lines are very much solid to accept the challenge of throwing it to the target. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Lucifera Santez (9/22/2013 9:15:00 AM)

    lovely.
    liked it a lot.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/21/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    An eloquent write about VOICE. Voice actually represent our feelings infact us. The poet is correct to say that voice is an endowment as voice is a power to establish our own identity. However voices can be manipulated to one's advantage too e.g. in elections etc. A wonderful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Beach Girl (9/19/2013 4:12:00 PM)

    Our voice represents what is in our heart and mind. It also has power to sway, so it should be used wisely. Love the poem, very insightful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/19/2013 12:42:00 PM)

    Very well expressed! ! ! ! Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,247 Points Unwritten Soul (9/19/2013 12:16:00 PM)

    Let it sounding yourself from inner words..hopefully it will healing all conditions_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 431 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (9/19/2013 11:39:00 AM)

    A voice without language, is sound without a comprehending ear.
    Crossing a barrier too deliver your message.
    A calling to come hear.
    What if they don't understand?
    Useless the syllables become.
    A motionless echo upon the mountains.
    Can anyone breach this divide without the proper language to coincide.

    Good poem, though understanding the voice is just as if not more important. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Hira Akhtar (8/17/2013 1:01:00 AM)

    A voice ought to..
    allowed independent
    given a space to spoken
    not to deliberately silenced
    or forced acceptance

    amazingly written how much our voice means.....and we can use it as our weapon also by talking politely but some misuse of this....i liked it great work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 95 Points S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari (8/14/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    Nice one. Great poem about voice. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,994 Points Patricia Grantham (8/11/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    Our voice is an important tool for our personal, public and private use.
    We can either make to to be heard softly or loudly. Do harm or good. Yes
    there is power in the voice. Try to use it wisely and constructively. Very
    inspiring. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 22, 2013


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