A Gun, A Man And Rights For New Brand Poem by adheez van der beanthz

A Gun, A Man And Rights For New Brand

Rating: 4.7


a man with rights
a gun at his side
no reason to fight
act as a cowboy in the past

a gun, a man, and a wisdom
fire anyone, random
a car, a child, even a wall
rush to greet the deathly call

are we in war?
why blood flooding on my floor?
while the silent Parliament
still hold on in his old brand

a nation with its laws
all the world see your show
the rights of the gun
a player has some fun

until when this will end?
how many life have to be sent?
might you finally understand
and make a better amendment

a man who isn't blind
a pen as a gun
please give us a good sign
for the future of our sons

earthzcity,150613

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
theme of this poem is taken from the issue of gun ownership in keeping with the U.S. amandemedent that now a hot issue in connection with the abuse of that rights and the number of victims who have fallen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 26 July 2013

Very nice write. the guns, the kings of the humanity killing, they should be stopped to not take any other lives anymore. love this write pal keep up writing about humanity.

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Heather Wilkins 26 July 2013

gun are for protection not for killers to act stupid wit. nice write

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Hazel Durham 26 July 2013

A powerful write on the slaughter of innocent people.

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Ramesh Rai 26 July 2013

a powerful write. a man with gun is ofcourse a stupid one. the gun can not stop the natural disaster which is the grt attack on human kind.then what is the use of gun to use on the innocent. grnd write.

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Danny Draper 28 July 2013

The issues of guns in the US is complex and intransigent as so many vested interests like it just that way. Good write on a complex issue with the same frustration of so many victims and their families.

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Badger Allen Poe 14 April 2019

Everyone is lying this poem is drivel. It flows like set concrete with imagry like in color.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 March 2014

A nice poem with the human folly it is truth and you gave a nice message we must try for such..thanks

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Roseann Shawiak 17 August 2013

You make some good points in your poem. The old adage - the pen is mightier than the sword is true especially in poetry. Although I'm a gun owner, learned how to shoot as a girl scout and was taught all the safety rules. Love target practice and have never shot anyone. Taught my sons how to shoot also. Guns don't kill people - people kill people. A gun can't shoot anyone unless a person pulls the trigger. Am an advocate for gun rights and stand behind the NRA completely. Have control over my weapons, and sons never took any of them unless we were with them. Because they were taught how to shoot and be safe they were never curious about them and never showed them off to anyone. It's all about education, ethics and morals. I respect your opinion and agree to disagree. Thank you for allowing me to read your poetry. RoseAnn

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 15 August 2013

hi, this really a good poem, i don't think you write in bahasa and translate all in english, it won't hv good rhyme. i like this poem, the lines are beautiful with deep meaning. You have suceed capture the theme, overall poem indeed lovely. not many ppl realize pen can killed more ppl than gun... thanks for sharing

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Alookh (matin) 14 August 2013

yeah! right! i really prefer these kinds of poems...this poem shows your care about human being...good luck adheez! :)

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