adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

A Shadow - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

I am a shadow
that born by the ray
though few that heed

I live in the darkness
even when the ray is lying
I still be there, still faithful

watching for your steps
keeping each your hopes
until you find
the next ray that come

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Comments about A Shadow by adheez van der beanthz

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/29/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    I am a shadow
    that born by the ray
    though few that heed..true painting thank (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points The Fallen Leaves Of Mira (1/3/2014 1:04:00 PM)

    very touching poem. It reminds me of myself.. Happy new year my friend :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points Gary H (12/29/2013 9:35:00 PM)

    Very nice, like this one quite a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,387 Points Valsa George (12/22/2013 12:49:00 AM)

    A shadow is inseparable! Wherever you go, it will follow you! A shadow can stay only with the light!

    A good write with deeper layers of meaning! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shereen Ramadan (8/15/2013 2:53:00 PM)

    wonderful
    it is simple but it is still has deeper meanings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arnav Gogoi (8/15/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    I like the way you have described the loyalty of our shadow that walks abreast all the time...I still be there, still faithful good use of words to describe the inconspicuous presence of our shadow....nice work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Bryan De Poet (8/12/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    nice poem my friend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arabella Picken (8/7/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    Quite like this.
    Good sum-up of a shadow. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,205 Points Sallam Yassin (7/26/2013 5:51:00 PM)

    nice to keep the hope
    til the next ray/ nice one (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 2:43:00 PM)

    your shadow is a constant companion it is always hanging around. a good write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,897 Points Patricia Grantham (6/11/2013 4:50:00 PM)

    Your shadow is always a constant presence. Whither you go
    it goes. You can't run nor hide from it. A very good write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (5/14/2013 1:11:00 AM)

    wild touches the heart, reflecting every inch that hold every breath......your such a balancing lines of poet i ever read....so smooth to recall the hook of survival....God bless a 10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2013


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