Beloved Mothers Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Beloved Mothers

Rating: 4.1


God creates magmas
Eternal flames
That carved Terra’s face

God creates springs
That gather in the ocean
Despite take a long tiring journey

God creates rainbow and auroras
Jewelry of the skies
Where beauty always live

Then God summarize it
Present a breath of life
Endue a piece of soul
And entrust a form of mandate

To the most glorious creature
To the real angel in the world
To her..
Beloved mothers

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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dedicate this poem to all mothers around the world
They are the real angel that God sent to us
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hira Akhtar 17 August 2013

beautifully described in words the dignity of mothers! ! ! I loved it keep on :)

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Aswath Raman 19 August 2013

YES! A very beautiful tribute to mothers! Very good verses!

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Kevin Patrick 19 August 2013

The 8th wonder of the world is a mothers love which transforms a child into a good human being, A fantastic dedication to all mothers, in the eye of creation, they are givers and protectors you reward them with great bounty Thank you for sharing

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

Such a beautiful and original write in tribute to mothers who are the heartbeat of family life!

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Alisha A. 27 August 2013

I love this! Great job!

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Bing Hua 20 March 2015

Thanks God from my deep heart!

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Antonio Liao 21 May 2014

so lovely to touch for every words that utter the silent feature of droplets lines, the lasting voice of eternity lives in your poem on what is a mother....thank you and God bless a 10/10

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Noreen Carden 29 December 2013

A lovely tribute to mothers beautifully written adheez

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 21 December 2013

A nice attribute for mother. You made such a lovely poem indeed. Mother is made from all the best and beautiful things. Blessed all mother in the world. Happy mother day

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Gary H 21 December 2013

My mom would be crying right now, nice work for sure.

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