Renee Marie

Rookie - 10 Points (Danbury, CT USA)

Aching With Restraint


I am aching to find my way into you.
I am vascilating with acceptance of your restraint.
Where is the door?
Why do I crave to find it, touch it, open it...
Why is it obscured?
I imagine it to be sealed.
I think it must be very, very heavy, perhaps steel?
Why am I standing, always,
on the outside?
Why do I wait
to be invited?
What if you long to have me barrel-through?
I don't know how.
I want it to be mutually
spontaneously
delightfully
auth entically
open
in truth
and absolute
wanting.

Submitted: Monday, April 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 09, 2013

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8 APR 2013

Comments about this poem (Aching With Restraint by Renee Marie )

  • Silver Star - 3,478 Points Is It Poetry (6/22/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    Your word patterns
    are delightfully unquestionable.
    I look forward to more I am sure.....iip
    Which leaves me curious. (Report) Reply

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