Jessica Lockhart

Advice To Your Child - Poem by Jessica Lockhart

Advice to who?
Advice for you!
Heed the words I say,
for if you do my dear little one
you'll be mighty okay.

Advice to who?
Advice for you!
Don't grow up too fast,
for if you you do it will lead to many
things you'll miss in your past.

Advice to who?
Advice for you!
Now all I have left to say,
do your best and try your hardest,
I'll still love you either way.

Comments about Advice To Your Child by Jessica Lockhart

  • Gold Star - 10,898 Points Allotey Abossey (5/20/2015 2:57:00 AM)

    Growth comes with responsibilities and there's no need to rush to grow, well taken mum.. God bless you.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,183 Points Paul Sebastian (10/9/2014 2:25:00 AM)

    Great. Keep it up. This poem on advice rhymes well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,316 Points John Westlake (3/21/2014 11:02:00 PM)

    Nicely put, almost as a mother to her daughter. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,165 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/1/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    do your best and try your hardest,
    I'll still love you either way. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,912 Points Sandra Feldman (6/30/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Very, tender, motherly, good, loving advice, NICE.
    Mothers are never wrong, governments are (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angela Sorenson (3/20/2010 2:14:00 AM)

    It is a nice poem.i like how it rhymes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Julio Hernandez (2/27/2010 8:27:00 PM)

    Nice poem, im pretty much still a child so i understand what you mean, i did rush things and i do miss my past, and your poem riminded me of that so thank you, even if its not much- in my opinion i think this poem deserves a 10 out of 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angela Sorenson (2/27/2010 8:05:00 PM)

    It can be good to recieve advice especially if it is good advice and if it is possible.Take care. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zack Burton (2/27/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    It's good. I like the stylistic details particularly. But it seems like the kind of thing I see a lot of. It's a bit generic.6 stars anyhow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 27, 2010

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