Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

All dreams not come true###(in 500)


All dreams may not come true
All credits due may not accrue
But with true reflection in mind
Ideas newer and newer may emerge and find
though may not be the nature too so kind

Dreaming in day time is not at all good
Good thoughts and efforts work as food
Earnest efforts to come out of wood
Failure may stun and you loose the hope
Still not difficult to walk on tight rope

It is not bad to dream for high sky
Speak always truth and do not lie
You may not have wings to fly
Still nothing wrong to work and try
No need to think or needlessly cry

You must have third sense to rise
All acts should be sensible and wise
Rise and fall is part of the game
Goal and ideas you must frame
No use trying luck or fate to blame

What ever you do must be with resolve?
Take full blame and never try to absolve
Put in best efforts to come out and solve
Full dedication and make everybody to involve
Try to mix with all as soluble dissolve

Despite put in best efforts it may not materialize
Failure may be sure but we may not visualize
All draw backs reasons before us but can’t analyze
Complete system may run into trouble and paralyze
Still strive very hard to see the reason and synchronize

Complete days routine and reflections of day’s thoughts
In night, thoughts clash and hard won battles are fought
Freedom and joy sincerely thought and brought
Stealing in day time but not easily caught
Simply night dreaming when lying in the cot

Continue to seek solution in dream,
Energy not focused but travel in beam
Try very hard and work as team,
Good efforts in direction but not as power game
Not letting any opportunity with excuses lame

So I find easy way to seek refuge in night
Lie low and have good say without light
more and more attention I try to pay
Always hope to find way in form of ray
washing shores with water at feet of bay.

Life doesn’t end with setting of day
Sun may rise again with bright ray
Your hopes may be high and tall
Vast horizon may lie open for all
Try for success without any fall

Come what may be the slogan
Life and opportunities may begun
Nothing to loose with worth attempt
Sometimes you may gain with action prompt

Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009
Edited: Friday, January 15, 2010

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/7/2014 6:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful and thoughtful poem. I loved reading each lines. All our dreams never comes true, trying to achieve our dream is neither wrong, some we may achieve with just one touch, still a new sunrise waits for us....loved the positivity it conveys. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Sharilynn Reaser (6/24/2014 4:41:00 AM)

    I really like the line Life doesn't end with setting of day! There are lot's of positive thoughts in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Abhinav Baruah (3/8/2010 6:50:00 AM)

    So powerful motivational poem... full of positive thoughts.... above all the excellent craftsmanship.......

    Thank you

    100+ (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (1/5/2010 8:49:00 PM)

    original poem on dreams...powerful and leaves the reader wanting to read it again for reflections in the mind+++++++10
    regards thanks for a great read (Report) Reply

  • Chand Shikari (11/7/2009 7:29:00 PM)

    All dreams not come true,
    All credits not accrue,
    But with reflections in mind,
    Ideas newer and newer find, (Report) Reply

  • Natasha Rathod (11/7/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    All dreams not come true,
    All credits not accrue,
    But with reflections in mind,
    Ideas newer and newer find, (Report) Reply

  • Raven Bishop (10/17/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Some dreams are meant to come true.
    Some are meant to be only lived in the essence of another universe.
    This is what we call fate.
    Very good! (Report) Reply

  • Sahar Sahar (10/4/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    So many problems and issues you discuss in few lines.....wonderful poem sir....... (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (9/23/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    fine write.......but dreams never die......certainly come true........ (Report) Reply

  • warner treuter (9/22/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    something fascinating about this poem, not sure how factual it is. maybe that's part of the interest. would have to rede more than twice. I think that if I understood it better I could not amuse myself so easily by transposing last sentence from Washing shores at feet of bay to Washing feet at shores of bay. Forgive me, what would life be without humour? i can but try to understand; and know I seldom really fully succeed. But that's ok, as I know you know. (Report) Reply

  • Jake Andrews (9/19/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    this poem had a unique style, im not sure if you meant to skip words or not but it gave it a unique feel to it. that being siad it did make it read a bit awkward, but it was good (Report) Reply

  • Beauty Philosophy (9/18/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    An amazing poem full of wisdom and strong mesages...One should always keep a beam of hope inside even if dreams don't come true...Voted. (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (9/13/2009 10:26:00 AM)

    It is a philosophical poem about the domain of the human conduct and the ethics. The poet offers means for the enhancement of understanding that leads to creative tensions This excellent rational philosophical poem reminds me the Kantian rational philosophy of morality. ''An action is moral in itself not because of its consequences but because any rational being wills it to be a universal law and it does not contradict itself.''. In his poem, the poet tries to reveal to us the essence of moral worthiness itself and the idea that the essential element of moral worth excludes other elements in moral motivation. The community doesn't have to constrain a person to be moral, but the rights of others must coerce that person to determine right from wrong.
    Excellent poem.Thank you for sharing...........10++++++++++ (Report) Reply

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