hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

All Dreams Not Come True###(In 500) - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

All dreams may not come true
All credits due may not accrue
But with true reflection in mind
Ideas newer and newer may emerge and find
though may not be the nature too so kind

Dreaming in day time is not at all good
Good thoughts and efforts work as food
Earnest efforts to come out of wood
Failure may stun and you loose the hope
Still not difficult to walk on tight rope

It is not bad to dream for high sky
Speak always truth and do not lie
You may not have wings to fly
Still nothing wrong to work and try
No need to think or needlessly cry

You must have third sense to rise
All acts should be sensible and wise
Rise and fall is part of the game
Goal and ideas you must frame
No use trying luck or fate to blame

What ever you do must be with resolve?
Take full blame and never try to absolve
Put in best efforts to come out and solve
Full dedication and make everybody to involve
Try to mix with all as soluble dissolve

Despite put in best efforts it may not materialize
Failure may be sure but we may not visualize
All draw backs reasons before us but can’t analyze
Complete system may run into trouble and paralyze
Still strive very hard to see the reason and synchronize

Complete days routine and reflections of day’s thoughts
In night, thoughts clash and hard won battles are fought
Freedom and joy sincerely thought and brought
Stealing in day time but not easily caught
Simply night dreaming when lying in the cot

Continue to seek solution in dream,
Energy not focused but travel in beam
Try very hard and work as team,
Good efforts in direction but not as power game
Not letting any opportunity with excuses lame

So I find easy way to seek refuge in night
Lie low and have good say without light
more and more attention I try to pay
Always hope to find way in form of ray
washing shores with water at feet of bay.

Life doesn’t end with setting of day
Sun may rise again with bright ray
Your hopes may be high and tall
Vast horizon may lie open for all
Try for success without any fall

Come what may be the slogan
Life and opportunities may begun
Nothing to loose with worth attempt
Sometimes you may gain with action prompt

Comments about All Dreams Not Come True###(In 500) by hasmukh amathalal

  • Freshman - 555 Points Muhammad Imtiyaz (7/12/2015 2:16:00 AM)

    nice lines..thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 79 Points Abiola Olubunmi (7/3/2015 12:49:00 PM)

    being look for such words from someone for so long, it really helped (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 343 Points Samantha Belsey (6/8/2015 3:35:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem, my brain wont rhyme i always find it impressive when people can, I like the tone of this poem and its sentiment. thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 592 Points Lokendra Singh (5/16/2015 3:38:00 AM)

    Sir you are the master of words...How good is your rhyming in the poem as well as message of the poem...Really you are a great poet (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,170 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/5/2015 4:04:00 PM)

    A great message, nicely penned in a lovely poem............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 971 Points Rishad Mk (2/7/2015 2:32:00 AM)

    highly inspirational poem. i like it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,364 Points Rajesh Thankappan (1/4/2015 11:08:00 AM)

    A brilliant motivational poem. Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,888 Points Patricia Grantham (12/24/2014 6:52:00 AM)

    So many good words of wisdom and
    understanding. Very enlightening. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 565 Points Sahra Hussein (11/9/2014 11:04:00 AM)

    What a nice poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,251 Points Piyush Dey (11/6/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    I like this one. nicely expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/7/2014 6:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful and thoughtful poem. I loved reading each lines. All our dreams never comes true, trying to achieve our dream is neither wrong, some we may achieve with just one touch, still a new sunrise waits for us....loved the positivity it conveys. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Sharilynn Reaser (6/24/2014 4:41:00 AM)

    I really like the line Life doesn't end with setting of day! There are lot's of positive thoughts in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Albert Price (2/1/2011 7:14:00 PM)

    All life is nonsense-folly. Just be true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Abhinav Baruah (3/8/2010 6:50:00 AM)

    So powerful motivational poem... full of positive thoughts.... above all the excellent craftsmanship.......

    Thank you

    100+ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,901 Points Ken E Hall (1/5/2010 8:49:00 PM)

    original poem on dreams...powerful and leaves the reader wanting to read it again for reflections in the mind+++++++10
    regards thanks for a great read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chand Shikari (11/7/2009 7:29:00 PM)

    All dreams not come true,
    All credits not accrue,
    But with reflections in mind,
    Ideas newer and newer find, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Natasha Rathod (11/7/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    All dreams not come true,
    All credits not accrue,
    But with reflections in mind,
    Ideas newer and newer find, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 496 Points Subbaraman N V (11/4/2009 2:54:00 AM)

    Innovatively thoughtful poem! Deserves to be in the top! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 364 Points Rafique Farooqi (10/28/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    Very innovative poem......10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raven Bishop (10/17/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Some dreams are meant to come true.
    Some are meant to be only lived in the essence of another universe.
    This is what we call fate.
    Very good! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 15, 2010

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