(20/04/1987)

What do you think this poem is about?

(Always for eachother)

I can see you
you can see me
and what we see
amazingly
is eachother

I can hear you
you can hear me
and what we hear
is ever so clear
we hear eachother

I can smell you
you can smell me
and what we smell
in a nutshell
is eachother

I can taste you
you can taste me
and what we taste
is oh so tasty
we taste eachother

I can feel you
you can feel me
and what we feel
is ever so real
we feel eachother

I think about you
you think about me
and what we think about
is the great times
we spend together

I love you
you love me
and what we love
and what we hold
is always eachother

Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, October 21, 2009


Comments about this poem ((Always for eachother) by Allen Steble )

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  • Nasteha Liban (5/18/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    This is beautiful Allen! Simple and amazing

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  • Ruby Mostazir (5/14/2013 12:57:00 AM)

    cute love poem...............

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  • surya . (6/24/2009 7:20:00 PM)

    well, beautifully expressed.
    voted10
    surya

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  • Asia Joseph (1/7/2009 8:48:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, gets the point across simplicity is key here, there is no drama with love, or at least there shouldnt be.....nicely written

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  • Nichola Okoro (1/7/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    It's a nice poem.I 've not really taken pains to analyse it but it's too siplistic for me and the should be stretched. I don't believe the arrangement style of modern poets. I think poets should sit up in order that poetry doesn't lose its value. Allen, you've done anice job.

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  • Michael Gale (12/19/2008 12:50:00 AM)

    Great poem here. I hadda givvtta ten here Kind Sir. I bet Krystal is pleased!

    God bless all poets alive or dead-MJG.

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  • pied piper (12/19/2008 12:23:00 AM)

    This is a beautifully written piece full of love and hope. Well penned. I enjoyed reading this piece.

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  • Krista Churchill (12/17/2008 11:27:00 PM)

    I hope you gave this to Krystal this is a great and sweet poem


    Krista

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  • ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (12/16/2008 7:01:00 PM)

    =D
    Loved the choice of writing style. Very unique
    Definetly puts a smile on your face whenever you read it! =]
    It was well worth the read!
    Scale 1-10.....12!

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  • Whitney Nicole Albright* (12/15/2008 11:07:00 PM)

    How sweet. This poem would make any woman fall in love with the man who wrote it to her. Lucky girl.

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