(July,10,1984 / Thousand Palms but live in San Diego now)

What do you think this poem is about?

Amanda

Brown haired beauty
An angel
A wish that came true
Amanda
You’re everything I need
You’re an angel
Why don’t you want me
Why do you hurt me
Am I not good enough for you
I told you how I felt
I liked you
I cared about you
Give me a chance please
You light up my heart
You make the little kid inside happy
Amanda
Hug me please
Hold me when I cry
I need you
You say you like me
You say I’m a need and not a want
Why did you choose a want instead of a need
Amanda
You say your not ready for me
You say that you’re not ready for the love I would give to you
Why did I open up to you
Amanda

Submitted: Tuesday, August 04, 2009


Comments about this poem (Amanda by Keith Young )

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  • Deborah Cromer (8/5/2009 12:31:00 AM)

    You learn more about yourself by experiencing this and writing about it. You don't know that know, but you will later. When you read this poem in the years to come, pieces will start to fit together. Your poem tells the truth about how feelings felt and given from the heart, can be rejected or not returned. Don't learn how not to give or share, just keep your guard up. Your special love will return your feelings back. You will share the same heart. Don't ever give up, don't ever close that door.
    Keep writing! Poets have deeper feelings than regular people I think... DC

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