Among the rust by Blaine McCanless

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Among the rust

You hide behind your smile,
Behind your plastic face,
You think noone knows
But we all feel the pain.
So stop pretending
Acting like nothings wrong
You only hurt yourself
When you put the smile on.
Now the day has come
The smile has fallen apart
Your face is cracked from all the lies,
And your mind falls apart.
Your smile has faded
And your skin turned to dust
Now its time to lay down among the rust.

Blaine McCanless

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Adryan Rotica (3/12/2008 11:34:00 AM)
You can not be free until you face the face that you face the world with....
this is a beautiful simple step that links us all to what you have written.....

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/3/2008 2:34:00 AM)
you're the magician of poetry.

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