Nyein Way

Rookie - 49 Points (19.1.1962 / Yangon)

An Oldness and a Daughter


I asked my daughter the question, 'Tell me the truth, do you feel the way that I am becoming old? '(I am 48 and my daughter is 17.)
My daughter responded,
'When you smoke, you are old.'

Monologue: I am not actually smoking.I am attempting to be back to dream.How did she see my oldness when I am going back to my dream?
I am just an old man waiting to see my dream appearing back to my life.
WOW!

Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2009
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