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Lillian Thomas
(6/10/2009 7:43:00 PM) |
this is a great poem, using the events of the world as a metaphor for time ticking by, like you're sitting there reading the paper or watching CNN and checking your watch every few minutes; its original and beautifully handled.
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Marie Shine
(5/25/2009 10:32:00 AM) |
What a wonderful poem depicting the events which come to pass while waiting for a much loved one. All the events fade into oblivion and insignificance when that special person appears - Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww! ! ! Beautifully written, romantic and from the heart.I just LOVED reading this poem and thank you for sharing it Jim.10++++ from me.
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Raynette Eitel
(12/15/2005 11:32:00 AM) |
What a good description of loving another person. Sort of a poetic 'As the World Turns' None of it matters when you see your love appear. I like this a lot.
Raynette.
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Heather Mueller
(12/15/2005 10:44:00 AM) |
wow something about this poem makes me feel really sad. this poem is a good one if it can cause a reaction from it's readers.
good job and keep writing
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