Connie Yost

Rookie (5/27/38 / Reed City, Michigan)

Assorted Snowflakes


A trillion assorted snowflakes
Are catching and keeping the rhythm,
For musically magical, silently sailing starships.
And me, I'm sailing right with 'em.

We turn, double back, in mid-flight,
Our laughter festooning the wintery night.
Unlimited beams are contagiously bright,
Lovingly giving the gift that is right.

Now the starships' bells are ringing.
Their sails triumphantly winging.
They have touched me with their music,
And held me with their singing.

Submitted: Wednesday, December 04, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, December 04, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/24/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    You've drawn a beautiful imagery of your beautiful imagination.
    'We turn, double back, in mid-flight,
    Our laughter festooning the wintery night.'
    So beautiful and imaginative!
    'They have touched me with their music,
    And held me with their singing.'
    Simply superb ending given to an excellent poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Ebi Robert (12/10/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    what I love about this work is the rhyming scene used I it. keep it up.....! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,549 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/6/2013 5:48:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem of fantasy watchin d snowflakes n yor imagination soaring with them. Beautiful! Now do attempt my riddle poem, u r smart enuf to get d answers. (Report) Reply

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