Ofentse Mercy Hajane

(1992-04-23 / South Africa/ Johannesburg/ Krugersdorp/ Munsieville)

Bloody Love


Swiftly raining
Pouring down my bloody face
Humor washing away from my senses
Love glowing of dull red
Roses gliding over the damp air of our sorrow
Under the wonderful grey sky
I earned a halo over my head
Indeed it was Love that she cursed upon me


The comfort of her body
Entwining in my thick fatty and hulky body
gave rise to a catastrophe
A new history that would only be written over the rocks of our mothers
Naked under it
I could feel her becoming one with my loins
Thrusting and shaving my manly ego
Sounds of murder rejoicing
Conceiving a bond for life
Brushing delicately over her toned thighs
Unhinging the secret of life
Travelling down the route of her arched history
Smoothly, with no hick of blood pouring out from it
Scratching my hind amour
Five lined scrolls to my shoulders
Salty sweat painfully sweetly pouring down under my skin
Heavily breathing
My soul trying to part my exhausted body
Rocking forth and back
She stood above me
A victorious winner...
... I won't be defeated by the queen of my own kingdom.


I fought back
Pinned her back on the walls of my castle
Steadily looking into her teary eyes
Her watery lips
Viciously pulling back my strength
Desire building up in my blood
Boiling to near nuclear energy
Sweet rosy smell on her neck
Drowsing my mind to an abyss of filth
The cushion of her well rounded tissue of pleasure
enraged my man-hood
Turning a monster out of a man
I went in stabbing her hard, violently with my kingly sword
I stabbed again and again and again
Her cries fuelling me
'Oooooh! ! ... Mmmhmm! ! '
Making me stronger
Anger rushed to my fingers
My mind slyed by a sensation
Only reserved for the Gods
My RAOR...
Loud it belittled that of a mighty king of the jungle
Her gazelled leaps from the urge of pleasure
Turned me into a much hungrier predator.
I stabbed and thrashed into her more
Precisely nearing the weak spot

My mind went blank
All that had possessed my blood
My body
My mind
Drained in an instant
Turning Earth into heaven
Tickling my jewel of life
I could feel her absorbing my tire-ness
Absorbing it all in her
Breathless
Wet
Sweaty
Her womanly smell stimulating closure
And the inevitable Love
Infecting me with sweet victory

And there we were
Trapped in the rain of our sins
A gift so precious it greed’s all

Sleep as deep as death
Gently claimed our broken exposed shells
The rain raining of bloody red love....

O.M Hajane

Submitted: Saturday, April 06, 2013
Edited: Thursday, November 07, 2013

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