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' BREATHE ME WITHIN YOU, MY LOVE...
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Breathe me in...and exhale
The coolness of th'passing
My love, so slowly dancing
Within th' womb of yo'r soul
Feel my breath...upon yo'rs
The core....of our existence
An' th' pulse that tips th' cup
Of love that pours so sweet
Warm me....with those eyes
That speak with heart-flame
Penetrate....my every sense
Endulge......your every need
Enraptured..... we are bound
By the chord....of our desires
Immersed.....within the nexus
Of this bond....so impervious
Come with me.......let us love
Inspire each others...dreams
I yearn, for yo'r feminine taste
I crave to feed......your hunger
Lay yo'r passion, down on me
Place yo'r soul aside my heart
I rest upon yo'r soften'd breast
While y'u take my breath within
Frank James Ryan, Jr.
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Thursday, December 28, 2006 |
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Friday, December 17, 2010 |
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Venkatesh Jagannathan (8/4/2010 11:20:00 AM)
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Breath me in and...exhale.
Wonderful lines fjr. truly passionate words full of romance. The way the desire is expressed with full freedom made me read again and again. Title 'Breathe me within you, my love' is really saying a lot. Please keep sharing.
Venkatesh J
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Lisa Deer (1/11/2010 8:19:00 AM)
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Tried Frank, but unable to grant your last request. Thanks for the support, eccentic uniques rule. Lisa
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Fay Slimm (1/11/2010 6:37:00 AM)
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The essence of this superbly romantic verse seeps through every line - the tenderest of pieces cannot be better than this sweet declaration of love. My sincere thanks for the sharing and will vote this into my favourites Frank - it will be a most worthy addition. - - from Fay.10 + + + + + +
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Kesav Easwaran (1/11/2010 1:31:00 AM)
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soft romantic inviting...well structured; in and out...good work Frank...thanks for the invite...10
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/27/2009 1:30:00 PM)
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‘Lay yo'r passion, down on me
Place yo'r soul aside my heart
I rest upon yo'r soften'd breast
While y'u take my breath within ‘
Intolerably softly Romantic. LOL.
Fully doused by the poem and listening it.
Ten+++
Ms. Nivedita
UK
Please read my Poems:
Why Hack My She [In Elite 500]
Enigmatic Navel or others.
niv
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Shayenne Mitchell (9/15/2009 7:46:00 PM)
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amazing write. though your writing is much different than most i've read, i understood, and felt everything you wrote. this is a truly good poem.
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Jasper Pane (7/28/2009 10:21:00 PM)
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Great! If this were a fight, you would have scored
a knockout in the first round!
Good grief, you are as good a writer as one
will ever come across!
Ryan, you give the Irish a good name!
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_____________________________________ - (7/11/2009 12:47:00 PM)
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loving so indulgently that one becomes ”George” in Elliot beginning of narcissism you stare longingly at mirror whose reflection? a careless caress from one finger to other magical sensational …. sitting alone I often get lost/ often I’m not me you
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Myrtle Thomas (4/21/2009 9:30:00 AM)
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I saw this as love is meant to be, not just the act of love making but breathing as one being and consuming one another in total togetherness, as these two become one.Out standing
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