(20 October 1987 / Jakarta)

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Critic for Old Love Manner

enough and nothing will be told
from now on,
I shut my heart and let it hang in my head
I've revolutionized the old manner

and Hegel might be incorrect
there's no way to rationalize feeling
in scientific theory

while Heaven promised that it deserves a throne
then what if Heaven were a lie?

the question to answer my waiting for what is mine
despite my destiny to have it or not
why should it be seen
I conclude it as the authentic of life
I just want to have more space of happiness
despite the injured heart

enough and nothing will be tolerated
after all,
I've confined the heart
and let love hang only inside the head
I've revolutionized the old manner
and I shall wait, hundred thousand million years
for it will explain the anxiety
no freedom no dogma nor lies
I just want to have more space of happiness
despite the injured heart

(2003)

Submitted: Friday, April 17, 2009
Edited: Sunday, April 07, 2013


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  • Aziz Alkaabi (6/9/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    I wish you find your space and happiness, Ida and that your injured heart heals fast so you continue creating more beautiful poems.

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