Treasure Island

Yvette Marina Nario

(11/16 / NEW YORK, NEW YORK)

DaDDY Don't Blame the RAin~


I think the real reason may be because your not physically around HER 7304.843 hrs in a years' worth of memorable Daddy/Daughter moments,305 of 24 hr days from the 60.873 days of fleeting hellos/ goodbyes that u r with HER, a trillion lovable hugs and daddy/daughter kisses that could have been given out for HER 5th,6th,7th and now 8th birthday~the hundreds(received and given out throughout the duration of the Summer slowly depleting through TIME as she watches every other little girl and boy HER age hug their mommy and equally their daddy after every school talent, chorus, instrumental, broadway type and gymnastics performance;
because u r 3000 miles; 50 States away: western, central, and eastern time zones, transitioning Oceans away-when u can be on the Atlantic verses the Pacific waters, same state, few miles of distance, on the same dimensional time as HER - your daughter~ ALL this creates discord, turbulence, disharmony, confusion, opposite ends~ even states of emptiness ~ Separation ties Knots~ Don't blame the Rain~
- aCTion BeATs HEARt -

Submitted: Friday, May 10, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 05, 2013

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