Debt Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Debt

Rating: 4.7


yesterday..
i has been pawn this heart
to a pieces of desire
and the face of freedom

today..
i sell the rest of life
to the pity prayer hope
for the justice that persecuted

tomorrow..
this soul will be confiscated
hung in the name of sins
from debt that never existed

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria C. Pires Costa 16 August 2013

May fairness, hope and freedom surround your days along with serenity! Thanks for sharing it!

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 August 2013

Wow. So beautifully expressed...loved reading it.

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Owain Glyn 12 June 2013

I really love the clever structure of this piece. I guess all our hearts have been pawned at some point in our lives, sometimes they are never redeemed.

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