Forgive Me... Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Forgive Me...

Rating: 5.0


I'm not a perfect man
nor a rich who have a treasure abound

I'm just a man with a handfuls of feelings..
that flared up like ocean waves
flew up like Katarina's hurricanes
and blew up like Tambora's eruptions

I'm not going to promise about morning beauty
moreover swear, if life always be happy

I'm just able to give..
a heart forms whose accompany, although the whole world not agree
a piece of soul whose believe, though millions eyes staring suspiciously
and a stack of body whose faithful to take care, despite tired weaken a life

This is me who present to you..
This is love that I'm offering you..

if you are doubt, please don't assume it taboo
if you can't accept, please don't assume it ignoble

forgive me, if I finally fall
fall in love with you


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 12 January 2013

An offering of a great poem is well received and cherished. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.

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Mohammed Albalushi 25 March 2014

so romantic full of true feelings, yes that all what we can give, lovely dear

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Katerina Richmond 12 November 2013

Oh my gosh..... This is wonderful! Forgive me, i finally fall, fall in love with you.... I'm sure you have someone close to your heart. Write on! (it's a pun. I couldn't help it. Sorry.)

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Cassandra Jasmine 24 September 2013

I especially enjoyed reading this poem. But you're human! Don't expect yourself to be stone-hearted. Great poem. Kudos

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2013

Beautiful poem..this is love I'm offering you..beautiful write. Loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

nice very nicely written. your love speaks wonders. enjoyed the write

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