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Ashraful Musaddeq (9/4/2008 4:17:00 PM)
'I am in a deep ocean of Love.' this concluding line is beckoning. Beautiful. |
Jonathan ROBIN (5/24/2008 4:15:00 AM)
'Where should I go to breathe again,
To feel freed from this burden? '
Go with the flow that to your harmony
may cue, clue offer so life’s symphony
discards discordance, tunes to hope’s runes which
true scope reveal, feel waft, weave, interstitch
as pattern’s reel’s revealed, concordancy
with intuition’s wellspring really rich. |
Sadiqullah Khan (5/6/2008 1:48:00 AM)
break free, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , |
Jennifer Vazquez (5/4/2008 4:42:00 PM)
I really like your poems and YES they're worth reading! ! ! ! !
right now...
Je t'aime! ! !
lol |
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (4/9/2008 9:25:00 AM)
'Where should I go to breathe again,
To feel freed from this burden? '
no where! love is everywhere :) |
Flora Gillingham (4/7/2008 10:07:00 AM)
But it is a gilded cage, isn't it, happy prisoner? |
Ashley Hart (4/3/2008 5:10:00 PM)
Very very good :) -Ashley |
Broken Peaces (3/13/2008 2:48:00 PM)
A great subject well executed pice of work keep it up 10 Chris |
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/13/2008 3:41:00 AM)
we all have a deep impact of love......... |
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