Aminath Neena

Freshman - 521 Points (Male')

Do You Believe Me? - Poem by Aminath Neena

Would you believe my claim
If I said our souls came
from another distinct place
of another extinct space?

I can feel you
As the insects feel the satin of flowers
I can feel you
As the flowers feel the touch of rain drops
I can feel you
As the rain feels the presence of its clouds
I can feel you
As the clouds feel the absence of its vapour from the sea
I can feel you
As the sea feels the distort of its dashing waves
I can feel you
As the waves feel the calmness of its foam
I can feel you
As the foam feels the craving of its plankton

Do you still have any doubts
on my claim of our whereabouts
in another distinct place-
at another extinct space?


Comments about Do You Believe Me? by Aminath Neena

  • Gold Star - 4,768 Points Sekharan Pookkat (5/9/2015 3:15:00 AM)

    obviously - a sixth sense works and feel another soul as the insects feel the satin of flowers far far from. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 11, 2014


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