Bless Villena

Rookie (12/26/1982 / Philippines)

Doubt Kills - Poem by Bless Villena

My mind
is like a knife
sharp, deadly
stabbing at my soul
Everyday it hurts
but the sad thing is
I don't really die
I just feel dead
My fault, yes I know

Comments about Doubt Kills by Bless Villena

  • Rookie - 35 Points Chris Newlash (9/21/2008 10:43:00 AM)

    That's so sad... Beautiful written, I like that you're not dead but feel dead... very touching! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/21/2008 4:59:00 AM)

    the mind is the key to a vast horizon..................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 20, 2008

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