Geetha Jayakumar

Silver Star - 7,536 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Each Footsteps!


Each footsteps I heard
Thought you were at doorsteps.
My curiosity made my
Feet's moves towards the entrance door
My hands in no time opened the doors
I dressed up beautifully
With a pleasant smile
To welcome you my dear.
My Eyes were searching
Only for you dear
Waiting to see you.
Just to have a glance.

Many days passed by
We were staying under one roof
But so aloof we stayed.
With Just a bye you left me
Everyday,
And each footsteps, I heard
I thought it was you.
I was excited to see you
I wanted to talk to you something
To whisper something in your ears
My eyes were looking only for you.
But
You never heard my whispers dear
You never saw my smile
You never looked at me at least once.
You came in, I opened the door only for you dear
But
All my enthusiasm drained away
All my love faded away
As each days went on this way.
Each time
When you came inside just saying hi
Without even having a glance at me dear

Why are you so aloof from me
Don't you feel the same love for me dear
Don't you remember how we cherished
Each moments
How could you ever forget that
Its not just the moments we shared

Did I flirt with anyone?
Did I ever opened the door for anyone.?
My heart opened the door only for you dear
Only and only for you dear!
As I loved you, only you, so much Dear!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Saturday, August 17, 2013
Edited: Saturday, November 01, 2014

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The same hindi version...almost same in

Kavitha...Paron ki Aahat!

Comments about this poem (Each Footsteps! by Geetha Jayakumar )

  • Gold Star - 11,774 Points Ramesh Rai (11/23/2014 11:35:00 PM)

    A very soulful write. You have nicely expressed your emotional thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,316 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (10/18/2014 1:33:00 PM)

    Each line brings desire, eagerness to know what next.......Geetha.....so beautifully crafted...I liked it very much..10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,636 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/27/2014 9:28:00 PM)

    Kisi Urdu shayer ka ek sheyr hay
    Andaz hobahoo teri awaze pa ka tha
    Nazrein utha ke dekha to jhonka hawa ka tha.
    Now I am going to read Paron ki Aahat. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,862 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/18/2013 10:17:00 PM)

    this is the same as kavita nice one (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,038 Points Tiku . (8/18/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    there is so much emotion in the poem.wish i could write like you.touching.for those who have fallen into real love.very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,060 Points Unwritten Soul (8/18/2013 12:02:00 AM)

    Unpredictable is always a side of life, but hope is never fade once we found something that we want to share ourselves to that thing..and here you tell that your love never fade for thing you like to own forever...things may come to test but only strong heart will still locked with it..beautful! ! ! ! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,520 Points Dave Walker (8/17/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    Love can be hard, a really great poem with lots of emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/17/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    a beautifully written poem it is sad when the footsteps are not the one you want to hear but some day they will be (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,074 Points Hazel Durham (8/17/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    Your heart will recover and you will hear the sound of genuine footsteps instead!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,150 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/17/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    Your love has turned into the shadow that was once a visible sight to hold.
    What was once a rock of the foundation has rubbled into sand.
    But take heart if you have sand make cement and build a new castle instead
    One with a magic prince of love sure to spin your head. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/17/2013 3:49:00 AM)

    My heart opened the door only for you dear
    Only and only for you dear

    these words reverberate! a lovely poem, Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/17/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    Hope perches in the soul and each soft sound and whisper of the wind feign someone's footsteps. (Report) Reply

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