Eyes Never Met Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Eyes Never Met

Rating: 4.5


Intuition at its peak
the vibe connected to
the other end's rage
the aura radiated
to hook-up the jag
the senses multiplied
insight became visual
full of clairvoyance
paranormal living
transcendental communique'
platonic perception
hanging in vacuum
vision submerged
in the third element.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2009

platonic perception hanging in vacuum vision submerged in the third element. Oh ammmmmazing pictographs! my memory flooded in your wording! flying into inner to inner powerful sight bold and beautiful! 10++++

0 0 Reply
Shelly Shelly 17 August 2009

superb wordings...very precise n nice picturisation.. must b given 10.. only one thing i cant relate.its like a paranormal..i think yes..but cant get the relation between the title and poem.. will u plz tell me

0 0 Reply
Kafil Uddin Raihan 17 August 2009

Ammazinggggg mam, So lovely and sweet.......

0 0 Reply
Zeinab Sherif 17 August 2009

very perfect work & unique i liked the way it is written. keep on writing.

0 0 Reply
Ted M 17 August 2009

Hi-tech communication! Feels like the T.V. series Dark Angel (Jessica Alba) . An unique idea..........

0 0 Reply
Chris G. Vaillancourt 17 October 2009

Simply beautiful, you are a talented poet. I have read several of your poems.

0 0 Reply
Sherri Coulter 13 October 2009

sixth sense...my favorite......10/10 read m&m's and isi(intersubjective intercourse.)

0 0 Reply
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 28 August 2009

Verse full of experience and the series is expressed philosophically and enchantingly.

0 0 Reply
Patrick A. Martin 24 August 2009

You know when I read this i feel like such an average poet.10

0 0 Reply
Ravi Chandran 23 August 2009

enjoyed very much...........nice thought! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! \i gave u ten! !

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success