Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Father, Me And My Son - Poem by Jahan zaib

Guided my soul,
When it was on roll,
Father my,
Of morals high,
Found pleasure in my smiles
To make me me, ran miles
I want to be,
As he's for me,
Hero, a super one,
For my cute little son.

Jahan Zaib: 23/11/2012


Comments about Father, Me And My Son by Jahan zaib

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 1:38:00 PM)

    Just be a good devoted dad and he will adore you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 37 Points Shihabudheen K J (12/3/2012 12:45:00 PM)

    Good message.nice penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 323 Points Poetheart Morgan (12/2/2012 4:57:00 PM)

    Not a hero but a father a good father. Human father like you are! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (12/2/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    Lovely.. love inherited from layers of era but all loves origin from above, God's love_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (12/2/2012 9:06:00 AM)

    next thread in the fabric of life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Reader (12/2/2012 8:54:00 AM)

    zabardast poem he, great bhai!
    beautiful and written with a feeling

    the reader (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,632 Points * Sunprincess * (12/2/2012 8:32:00 AM)

    oh you definitely are a hero for your cute little one..this is
    beautiful and he is going to cherish this one when he is
    older...fabulous write. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 2, 2012



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