Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

Get Your Peace Back. - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Your existence, Your pride, is a wish fulfilled.
Your body, Your mind n soul, were nourished.
Your merit, Your intelligence, were nurtured.
Your wishes, Your dreams, were supported.

Your existence, Your pride, not your alone.
Your body, mind n soul, are in deep debt.
Your merit, Your intelligence, are payable loan.
Your wishes n dreams fulfilled, are committed.

Awake, from head to foot, You are indebted.
Your glory, Your fame, Your wisdom, are at stake.
Your riches, Your fortune, are being laughed at.
Your glitter, Your shine, are waning black.

Go fast and act, protect Your soul, be wise.
Fulfill the commitments not kept, repay Your debts.
Don't be a miser, don't hesitate, Your heart cries.
Laugh with them, Get your peace back, Long awaited.





© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved. 


Comments about Get Your Peace Back. by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (10/10/2008 3:20:00 AM)

    Very well crafted poem Palas....keep writing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 14 Points Reetesh Sabr (9/29/2008 10:02:00 AM)

    tere mere naam nahi hai, karz purana hai
    jeevan kya hai tez hawa mein deep jalana hai..
    it appeared like this to me... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (8/10/2008 5:48:00 PM)

    To be at peace with oneself is a gift to be cherished. A very powerful expression of your inner thoughts. Wishing you the peace that passes all understanding, Palas.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/9/2008 1:44:00 PM)

    .....a 10 has been clicked for this thoughtful composition. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Janri Gogeshvili (8/7/2008 7:38:00 AM)

    'Don't be a miser, don't hesitate, Your heart cries.
    Laugh with them, Get your peace back, Long awaited.'
    Strong, expressional feeling self-determination …10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted Sheridan (8/3/2008 8:17:00 AM)

    Man should learn to set aside his self pride and find his peace of mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (7/31/2008 6:44:00 PM)

    Nothing to say... it's amazing...10 from me.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014


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