Ali Adamson


Ghazal. (Urdu)


Na dayarah ho koi, koi bhi lakeer na ho
Jiyo to aisay jiyo, zindgi haqeer na ho

Bura karoon to padosi mujhay pukaaray bura
Bhala karoon to akhbaar me tash'heer na ho

Mery ash'aar hon pyaambr sachayi kay
Meri zabaan kisi khof ki aseer na ho

Ho dost mera, jo is trah milay aadam!
Labon sy phool jharen jb, nigaah teer na ho

Submitted: Tuesday, January 21, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, January 21, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 10,262 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/1/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    Mery ash'aar hon pyaambr sachayi kay
    Meri zabaan kisi khof ki aseer na ho

    Good work in urdu, Please, do more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 285 Points V P Mahur (3/25/2014 2:26:00 AM)

    Dear Ali,
    I would only say Wao!
    What a nice feel you expressed so simply. Great work. Keep it up.
    Thanks!
    Please reply. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,750 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/3/2014 8:52:00 AM)

    Aapke Ghazal ki taarif karoon ya
    Phoolon ki Varsha karoon shabdon say
    Chand lakeeron say kiya hai appne haqquiqat ka bayaan
    Vakey mein kaabilay tarrif hai appki yeh Ghazal.......Shukriya!

    Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing beautiful Ghazal. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,663 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/24/2014 7:21:00 AM)

    Bura karoon to padosi mujhay pukaaray bura
    Bhala karoon to akhbaar me tash'heer na ho
    Bad falls on the reflecting side of the mirror and good falls on the other side. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,360 Points Neela Nath (1/21/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    Ho dost mera, jo is trah milay aadam!
    Labon sy phool jharen jb, nigaah teer na ho - - - - - - - - -the cream of this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 258 Points Shahzia Batool (1/21/2014 7:53:00 AM)

    Your style of expression has a certain slant in it, may be the times wrapped up in ironical fabrics are having their share in it! ...it's a strong voice speaking! (Report) Reply

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