Palas kumar Ray (Tripura. India)

really wonderfull thoughts.
'Give your child a heart, Oh, Mother
Give your child a heart.
Heart that tells them to care
Oh, Mother, heart that tells them to share.'
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surya

Not forgetting to give your own inner Child a heart.... wonderful words, thank you Palas. PH

thanks sir, being a mother myself.............that was good read...............

so simple in words yet so deep in thoughts.
loved it! ! !
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Its beautiful how you have written a very nice poem using the simplest of words. The message sinks into heart. Thank you for sharing.

'Give your child a heart, Oh, Mother
Give your child a heart.
Heart that nourishes the hurt
Oh, Mother, heart that consoles the heart.'

So lovely, so touchy!
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'child is the father of the man'...thus is the poetic saying...mother is the real father of the child, i find in these lines...good sensible write 10

a heartfelt appeal. Virtuous children are the key to a bright future

this is so touching, the title says it all. compassion and love for fellow beings are fast disappearing. timely message

I really liked that one! It's beutifully written, it's rhythm makes the poen easy to be read, and it has a sweet message.