The Silent Sword

Rookie - 14 Points (April 2,1997)

I Am My Death - Poem by The Silent Sword

I am my own Pain.
I am my own Darkness.
I am my own Fear.
I am my own Weakness.

I am my own Downfall.
I am my own Destruction.
I am my own Suffering.
I am all that is Strife.

I am my Worst Enemy.
I am my own Murderer.
I am my End.
I am my Death....

Poet's Notes about The Poem

My mind warned me....

Comments about I Am My Death by The Silent Sword

  • Gold Star - 14,246 Points Bri Edwards (2/18/2013 10:05:00 PM)

    i'd like to sit down and discuss this with you.........and i'm not even a psychiatrist. when can you come to california? can you write one titled i am my life? thanks for sharing. i only wish you had left more of a poem note than My mind warned me.... i had to try at least 4 verification codes to send this to you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Alex Daydream (6/16/2012 1:09:00 AM)

    That's a dark one, and again, one I can really relate to. This poem really goes straight to my heart because I've felt exactly like that at times. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/13/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    simple, brief but very true & heart provoking, poem have bitter reality of life but we have to accept it..u done a great job well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/9/2012 1:07:00 PM)

    I loved this poem for two reasons. I agree with many things about myself but then I reread it and substituted opposites to your words. It was enlightening both ways. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Liz Amos (6/9/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    Wow, amazing. All we have to fear is ourselves... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 9, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 9, 2012

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