Palas kumar Ray (Tripura. India)

What do you think this poem is about?

I can look into your heart.

I can look into your Heart
And also I can See.
How much love and care
there you kept for me.
I can see
How much you do think
for my health, for my need.
And also I can stare
How much you do share
Your pain, your sufferings
And how much you don't plead!

I can look into your Heart
I can see
The little bit of scorn,
kept hidden in care
Like a pinch of salt
in a tasty soup of corn.
the anguish and fire,
the dependence and fear,
the trust and faith
Which you never spoke to me.
But I can see, I can stare.

I can look into your Heart
Oh my wife, Don't lie
I can stare your heart,
I can see your beats.
I can see your soul
Oh my wife, Don't lie
You can't make me a fool.
.
.
posted on 09-06-2008
Copyright ©®2008, Palas Kumar Ray. All rights reserved.

Palas kumar Ray
Submitted: Monday, June 09, 2008
Edited: Saturday, March 27, 2010


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  • Sonya Florentino (2/23/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    i like this one....very touching...

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  • Maia Padua (10/26/2008 12:47:00 AM)

    your poem says it all...very nice and inspiring..touching...i salute you for this...you and your poetry....relates the best YOU...humble, responsible and loving....10+ for my good friend.

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  • Shelby Lanier (10/25/2008 4:19:00 PM)

    aww this peom makes me want to cry! its so emotional!

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  • Tj Becker (10/24/2008 3:36:00 PM)

    Bonded by love and marriage, I think you become one with the person in mind. Able to see things others can not. But love has to be there, with out love, you see nothing but a person, not the soul, .
    I loved this poem very much

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  • Sumita Datta (10/19/2008 10:32:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ... what a nice poem... if she really thinks for you... you can feel that... cann't deny.... :)

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  • Duncan Wyllie (10/15/2008 3:15:00 PM)

    Such vision, so delicately written
    Love duncan X

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  • J Lee (10/14/2008 4:41:00 AM)

    Can we really see a person heart
    Old man n woman also did say
    no matter how long we are 2gether with one another
    We don't know all of him/her and what they think

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/7/2008 8:48:00 AM)

    palas kumar ray
    two hearts spray
    the dust of love
    as green as turf.....
    wife and me
    two a many.

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  • Mamta Agarwal (10/7/2008 3:41:00 AM)

    its a very touching poem. oh, yes, Palas we do feel we know our loved ones like the back of our hand, - love, compassion and presence takes cares of all, being a.
    silent witness also uplifts the bond. full of devotion and sensitivity.10

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  • Moushumi moushumi (10/3/2008 9:11:00 AM)

    It is she loves you & therefore she needs you in many ways. you are true human being who feels for anyone he loves.your feeling always inspires my unsaid phrases to come to light towards my beloved.

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