Harsh Vardhan k

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I Dont Know Y - Poem by Harsh Vardhan k

I don't y u made me cry
I don't know i wan die
My eyes can bleed for u,
My hrt only plead for u (to God)
My eyes sees so many dreams for u.
My heart only want to screams for u

I don't y U made me cry
I don't know i wan die
I felt Ur the only one for me in my life
U made me feel like i m none in ur life
I always trusted U like GOD
Bt U busted me like i m Odd

I don't y U made me cry
I don't know i wan die
I always felt Ur my Best bt
U made me feel like im Worst
I don't know is it Confusion or
Is der any real Reason

I don't y U made me Cry
I don't know i wan Die
I always want to see U Strong bt
I made me feel as person im Wrong
My sole is still waits for U Alltime
My hrt ll never able to hate U Anytime

I don't y U made me cry
I don't know i wan die
I always wanted to see U my Head
Bt now im feeling like dat im Dead
Wid U i felt so much of a gud Gain(in life)
Bt without U im feeling just Pain


Comments about I Dont Know Y by Harsh Vardhan k

  • Silver Star - 3,764 Points Is It Poetry (7/28/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    And if you've ever read
    the sky the sun the trees the wind
    the heart of all you need to be the one....iip (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/6/2012 11:23:00 AM)

    creative spelling adds flavoring for thought.Poetic picture of love denied aptly done.
    Good solid poem of points.
    Staunch, sad conclusion, no hope? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Destiny Keener (1/31/2012 9:18:00 AM)

    This one is good... prolly the best of urs i believe. id work on word usage... broden ur vocab, , , make it more interesting, ? (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 821 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (1/26/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    Sad story, just keep writing everything down. Touching write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (1/14/2012 9:30:00 PM)

    This is a song as well as a poem. I like the original lines I always trusted U like GOD/Bt U busted me like I m odd. I can identify with this Harsh. My heart goes out to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carlos Ormachea (1/14/2012 8:12:00 AM)

    The poem is rather reiterative and the weird (and I should add, unnecessary) spelling makes matters even worse. Sorry, I did not appreciate it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afolabi Boluwatife 'muyiwa (1/14/2012 3:56:00 AM)

    Cool one but I would like to make some corrections, it is 'Soul'..not 'sole' and you should try to stop the use of abbreviations, it has more significance when you write poems in full...cool one there.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (1/10/2012 1:55:00 PM)

    This is fanastic job and I love the ending. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alicia Meyers (1/7/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    Very nice and very thought out. I like it. :) Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (1/6/2012 2:45:00 PM)

    I like this one, very nice......well thought out..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Neetha Sasidharan (1/4/2012 8:11:00 AM)

    grt rhyms...
    '''''''i trusted u bt u busted me'''''
    i liked dat usage.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nicky Hill (1/3/2012 2:46:00 PM)

    that made me sad, lovely style of words you have well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sajna Kailas (12/31/2011 4:00:00 AM)

    super! ! ! nice writing style! love it! keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/23/2011 5:38:00 AM)

    An emotional poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! good one! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 14, 2012


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