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Harsh Vardhan k

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I dont know Y


I don't y u made me cry
I don't know i wan die
My eyes can bleed for u,
My hrt only plead for u (to God)
My eyes sees so many dreams for u.
My heart only want to screams for u

I don't y U made me cry
I don't know i wan die
I felt Ur the only one for me in my life
U made me feel like i m none in ur life
I always trusted U like GOD
Bt U busted me like i m Odd

I don't y U made me cry
I don't know i wan die
I always felt Ur my Best bt
U made me feel like im Worst
I don't know is it Confusion or
Is der any real Reason

I don't y U made me Cry
I don't know i wan Die
I always want to see U Strong bt
I made me feel as person im Wrong
My sole is still waits for U Alltime
My hrt ll never able to hate U Anytime

I don't y U made me cry
I don't know i wan die
I always wanted to see U my Head
Bt now im feeling like dat im Dead
Wid U i felt so much of a gud Gain(in life)
Bt without U im feeling just Pain

Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011
Edited: Saturday, January 14, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,050 Points Is It Poetry (7/28/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    And if you've ever read
    the sky the sun the trees the wind
    the heart of all you need to be the one....iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/6/2012 11:23:00 AM)

    creative spelling adds flavoring for thought.Poetic picture of love denied aptly done.
    Good solid poem of points.
    Staunch, sad conclusion, no hope? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Destiny Keener (1/31/2012 9:18:00 AM)

    This one is good... prolly the best of urs i believe. id work on word usage... broden ur vocab, , , make it more interesting, ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (1/14/2012 9:30:00 PM)

    This is a song as well as a poem. I like the original lines I always trusted U like GOD/Bt U busted me like I m odd. I can identify with this Harsh. My heart goes out to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carlos Ormachea (1/14/2012 8:12:00 AM)

    The poem is rather reiterative and the weird (and I should add, unnecessary) spelling makes matters even worse. Sorry, I did not appreciate it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afolabi Boluwatife 'muyiwa (1/14/2012 3:56:00 AM)

    Cool one but I would like to make some corrections, it is 'Soul'..not 'sole' and you should try to stop the use of abbreviations, it has more significance when you write poems in full...cool one there.. (Report) Reply

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