Treasure Island

Payal Parande



I am starting a poem
Confuse, how to start writing my pain
Joy, love
How to write it beautifully
So I can share it with someone
Someone who'll read it
Even thought for fun

Should I write about wide sky
Or bright sun
Should i write about something old
Or Something new
Something that speaks for itself
Should I write about me
Or Something that is wide as

Something that can't be weak
Something that explains whole
Should I write Something that is hard as rock
Or soft and light as feather

Should I write about the last view
Or something that flies
I got so much to tell
But how am I suppose to do it
With word so few............payal parande

Submitted: Saturday, June 16, 2012
Edited: Monday, September 02, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (4/30/2014 3:00:00 PM)

    Loved this poem. The confused state of the mind has been well portrayed in the poem.
    'I got so much to tell
    But how am I suppose to do it
    With word so few.......' - Wonderfully told! (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (5/9/2013 11:39:00 AM)

    yeap we have bundles of reasons to write a poem but the conflicts always take place during this activity, you nicely explain the whole phenomenon....outstandingly well constructed structure elaboration of our emotions....well done (Report) Reply

  • Mark Dillon (8/19/2012 8:52:00 AM)

    your doing fine, nice thoughts, nice writing, sometimes we all get a block, and sometimes we have a million thoughts and words winging through our mind like flocks of starlings going so fast we cannot hope to catch them. (Report) Reply

  • Charles Jagongo Ogola (8/8/2012 9:36:00 AM)

    Excellent I This is a common problem writers, at times you really wonder what to put on paper especially when there is a deadline! (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (7/13/2012 11:03:00 AM)

    nice poem. you have confused me too. i guess you should write about Payal parande..... enjoyed your question. You have shared one thing with me................ you have value for all the things and will write... (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (7/1/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    nice color ful lines tinged with youth and confidence....
    a belief in ones ability to walk the the stars or fly like a bird
    lovely charming...but do write about the payal parande too... :) (Report) Reply

  • Indira Babbellapati (6/30/2012 1:08:00 PM)

    write about all these and more! the more u write the better gets ur craft... don't allow the urge to write die... thnq for the invite, young lady! (Report) Reply

  • Indira Babbellapati (6/30/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    write about all these and more... the more you write the better gets ur craft... go on, young lady. thnq for ur invite... stay blessed! (Report) Reply

  • Chitra - (6/29/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    so much to say but no words to match the same....universal feeling.....overwhelming thoughts...well done (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (6/24/2012 10:18:00 PM)

    Certainly finding what to write can be an issue and once started where to take the poem, it can be wide open. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (6/20/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    To write a poem 'tis not that much easy but not so difficult too! ! ! ! !
    You're a talented poetess! ! ! ! ! !
    Waiting for the words from your quill! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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