Treasure Island

Maxim Muyu

(2nd July / 1981 nairobi)

I'm very lonely,

Im very lonely,
So lonely I'm I,
So lonely,
That I thought of metaphysic's,
So lonely that I thought, I sit boredom,
Is metaphysics a sense of boredom,

So lonely like the moon,
Is it because other's are hell, ?
So lonely like the sun,
Is it because of no man to trust, ?
Very lonely,
So lonely,
That I can only trust the earthly volition,
So lonely,
That these people Increased my afflctions and agony,
So lonely that I think of the official thought's,
Is time so Official that it gave us another chance to survive.?

Egoism and vicissitude's,
Don't take me there,
Take me here,
No where are we going, ?
Do we human's really know where we be going, ?
Or are we just guessing and living it up.

Submitted: Thursday, December 28, 2006
Edited: Friday, December 17, 2010

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  • Mette Møller (12/1/2007 7:34:00 AM)

    I think the future vision is like our vision of the past in that, it has to be... something, and that it is on low. People struggling generally too much in the second to second present to get a good idea, and simultaneously forgetting that we are all people the ones even we come into momentary contact with, and still we have a need to just be seen and acknowledged, which makes us lonely even in crowds. Loneliness can maybe be compared to an absent recognition of our social needs and wants in our picture of the world. Just a couple more friendly hi´s every day would be something. In this technological and information age, information of an informing nature is paradoxically again maybe just a commodity to be dished out after the consumers request and or demand. Studying the international, macropsychology of this time would be too interesting. And maybe as you wrote just because me I´m lonely. The brain gotta have somewhere to go too, eh. (Report) Reply

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