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Krishnarasa Seshadri
(11/10/2009 6:02:00 AM) |
How much i yearn to join there
To wring out internal pains!
I love these lines! rains give out a feeling of being purged!
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Alf Hutchison
(11/9/2009 2:23:00 AM) |
There is just something so magical about going out into the rain... very well captured Kesav...regards Alf
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Tsira Gogeshvili
(11/8/2009 11:51:00 AM) |
Kesav, Very beautifully also it is melodious... Pleasantly to read ...10...
Thank you for the nice comment...
Tsira
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Ranjit Ravindran
(11/5/2009 1:55:00 PM) |
Wow Sir, this poem is a masterpiece. You captured the feelings right.
It projects your child like tendency to play in the rain at the same time reflecting the vast experiances of you life. Enjoyed it.
A sweet 10,
Ranjit.
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Shakir Gumnam
(11/5/2009 2:44:00 AM) |
It's strange how this outstanding write skipped catching my eye, it's a brilliant piece Kesav, I loved the imageries, very poetic and yet so near to reality, indeed it's first class poetry!
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Sathyanarayana M V S
(11/4/2009 11:01:00 AM) |
'How much i yearn to join there
To wring out internal pains! '
Great words. Perfect poetry..............
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Bob Blackwell
(11/3/2009 2:42:00 AM) |
Water brings new life no matter what. Water washes away the old residue of life. Water quenches thirst, perhaps more knowledge gained? Interesting Kesav.
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Sadiqullah Khan
(10/29/2009 2:41:00 AM) |
A wish worth looking for. I think its time we drench in rains now. Lovely write Kesav.10
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