Payal Parande (8-7-1994)
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journey to the dream world.........
My wish comes true
I become a bird today
In the beginning, I fall down clumsily to open my wings all the way
But one by one I open them into bright rays
The journey begins and i fly through the mountains of my memories
The memories I have in my wits,
As i see it full i see the surface is occupied with
Layers of love's snow (very thick)
And the left of it with the greenery of the happiness I got from it,
I wander there (for a long beat)
Then I fly toward the dark green jungle,
Threes full of small and long leaves
Having trouble to go through,
With so dark bushes tangling myself into them,
Afraid I'll be bogged down, They are too massive
But sorting my way out
I am getting into the open now wondering where to go?
Oh! What I see? I see an immense door
With alluring flowers on the one side
An enchanting voice coming from somewhere,
Come inside it says
But something clicks and grasping myself back discerning something
Wishing never to open this door,
Here, my bad temptation stays
Getting myself away from it as soon as possible, I go further
Seeing nothing at all
There is nothing in my sight nothing but wide open blank and white
I get scared, have I gone blind? I am thinking
Suddenly I opened my eyes, smiling to myself
I took a pen and started to write...
Poet's Notes about The Poem
like my love and happiness are a lot so i used big mountains to describe that
and the place where i am confuse or get confuse for that i used dark bushes and jungle
and for my bad temptation i used a closed door tempting but full of danger
and then the things i haven't done and its empty for that i used blank sky and white
and to make it full to start something new i took a pen and started to write........
that is how i wrote my poem...........
payal
it is a short journey of my mind..as i think we poets see the world through our heart and then paint them into our mind like beautiful art on the cotton canvas...and some of them we put it on a piece of paper....
i hope you like it
love,
payal
Comments about this poem (journey to the dream world......... by Payal Parande )
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ah completely imaginative & beautiful poem, shows your command over diction & art of poetry...
every visit of your poetry shows your poetic skills....
mastery to glorify the canvas of poetry...: -)
A very beautiful way to explain a temptation. This poem makes me wish it wasn't so bad but then it wouldn't be a true temptation LoL! Very beautiful write :)
beautiful heart and perious piece
give yourself wings
and fly fly
to every where and corners
of yoursoul
god bless u
wishes can come true... :)
Excellent write Payal, very imaginative.
Beautiful poem, so i am really understand why it so beautiful...sweet write, thanks for your invite...
such a good write keep it up_sagar
This is a beautiful Poem. Keep up the good work, Payal.
A special poem of beauty and adventure.
A very beautiful poem, really like it.
It is a beautiful poem with distinct literary value. Your command over diction and right usage of words at this age promises you to be really marvellous poet in waiting. Go ahead Payal