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journey to the dream world.........

My wish comes true
I become a bird today
In the beginning, I fall down clumsily to open my wings all the way
But one by one I open them into bright rays
The journey begins and i fly through the mountains of my memories
The memories I have in my wits,
As i see it full i see the surface is occupied with
Layers of love's snow (very thick)
And the left of it with the greenery of the happiness I got from it,
I wander there (for a long beat)

Then I fly toward the dark green jungle,
Threes full of small and long leaves
Having trouble to go through,
With so dark bushes tangling myself into them,
Afraid I'll be bogged down, They are too massive

But sorting my way out
I am getting into the open now wondering where to go?
Oh! What I see? I see an immense door
With alluring flowers on the one side
An enchanting voice coming from somewhere,
Come inside it says
But something clicks and grasping myself back discerning something
Wishing never to open this door,
Here, my bad temptation stays

Getting myself away from it as soon as possible, I go further
Seeing nothing at all
There is nothing in my sight nothing but wide open blank and white
I get scared, have I gone blind? I am thinking
Suddenly I opened my eyes, smiling to myself
I took a pen and started to write...

Submitted: Saturday, July 28, 2012
Edited: Monday, May 13, 2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

well i was thinking about some things and then thought that my thoughts are in mind right? then there should be so many other things too like every corner for every other thing and i just wanted described it.....and thought of doing it using nature and some other element
like my love and happiness are a lot so i used big mountains to describe that
and the place where i am confuse or get confuse for that i used dark bushes and jungle
and for my bad temptation i used a closed door tempting but full of danger
and then the things i haven't done and its empty for that i used blank sky and white
and to make it full to start something new i took a pen and started to write........

that is how i wrote my poem...........
payal

it is a short journey of my mind..as i think we poets see the world through our heart and then paint them into our mind like beautiful art on the cotton canvas...and some of them we put it on a piece of paper....
i hope you like it
love,
payal

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  • Farah Ilyas (4/29/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    ah completely imaginative & beautiful poem, shows your command over diction & art of poetry...
    every visit of your poetry shows your poetic skills....
    mastery to glorify the canvas of poetry...: -)

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  • ~~ Lyda ~~ (12/20/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    A very beautiful way to explain a temptation. This poem makes me wish it wasn't so bad but then it wouldn't be a true temptation LoL! Very beautiful write :)

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  • Sallam Yassin (10/6/2012 12:53:00 PM)

    beautiful heart and perious piece
    give yourself wings
    and fly fly
    to every where and corners
    of yoursoul
    god bless u

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  • * Sunprincess * (9/1/2012 8:08:00 PM)

    wishes can come true... :)

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  • Valerie Dohren (9/1/2012 4:49:00 PM)

    Excellent write Payal, very imaginative.

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  • Sagar Patil (8/28/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, so i am really understand why it so beautiful...sweet write, thanks for your invite...
    such a good write keep it up_sagar

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  • Charles Jagongo Ogola (8/27/2012 2:34:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful Poem. Keep up the good work, Payal.

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  • Knight Fizzstorm (8/24/2012 1:53:00 PM)

    A special poem of beauty and adventure.

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  • Dave Walker (8/17/2012 11:19:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, really like it.

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  • M.d Dinesh Nair (8/17/2012 8:22:00 AM)

    It is a beautiful poem with distinct literary value. Your command over diction and right usage of words at this age promises you to be really marvellous poet in waiting. Go ahead Payal

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